Reviews for The smell of metal and rain
ridiculouslyhappy chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
This is so freaking cute! It makes my heart ache ah. Great job!
InksandPens chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
WHAT A GOOD BOY. I love this POV. I love the trope of seeing how the pet character processes things, and this was the best I could've hoped for when I clicked.
Lightscales15 chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
*gasp* Oh my goodness gracious, I love this. It's such a nice change of POV that I hadn't seen before. And I love it. I love Sumo so much, that puppy is immortal and he shall never die I don't care what science says. He makes Hank and Connor happy and that shall grant him inmortality. I love the way he learns to interact with Connor, obviously he won't be able to do it in the same way that he does with humans so he has to look some other way. But that's okay because he likes Connor and wants him to be happy. Sumo deserves the world. Such a great fic thank you!
Devin Trinidad chapter 1 . 7/16/2018
Honestly, this was well written and unique. It really details how Connor’s deviancy can affect others, in this case, Sumo. Well done! Note, there were a few phrases that were a little off, but other than that, I really liked this piece. Keep up the great work!
Emlaith chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
Beautiful Sumo and Connor are such cuties
laila chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
oh fridge, that's adorbs
GN18 chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
WE DONT DESERVE DOGS uwu
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Wow this is an amazing fic!
Sesshy'sGirlLOL01 chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
I liked it :) Sumo is such a good boy.
AliceCullen3 chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
LOVE IT!
error-Ra9 chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Hi!

I really love your fic! you wrote a one-shot full of kindness and I like the way you use Sumo. It's original and very plaisant. Connor and Hank are the most appealings characters in the game and by sumo's eyes, with very simples words, you success in transposing their beautiful relashionship.

thanks for your fic ( and sorry for ma bad english!_)