Hello! I just binged your story and I love it! I hope you continue the story!

Interesting

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

Good story and looking forward to seeing where you take this.

come on! UPDATE!

Thank you so much hope another update comes soon awesome story would love to see Daphne Greengrass or Susan Bones part of the Harlem

Is the "brat's" name Daniel? Or is it Damien? Please correct.

its quite good... I read all eight chapters today and it held my interest quite well... I hope you finish it, and not follow the path of dishonour that so many other authors tread... My pet hate is swearing they will finish then mark it complete on a cliffhanger... I always picture them sneaking through the bookshops and library's ripping out the last chapters of books while cackling like Bellatrix on acid... I always hope their personal hell when they pass is a room filled with their favourite books... with the last chapters missing. I still don't understand why they don't write the whole thing THEN post chapter by chapter... I also picture their house with only most of the wall in each room decorated... imagine... two strips of paper missing from each room, or a man arriving at work with one cheek unshaved and two fingers unwashed...

What an interesting story, I am really enjoying it and I hope to see you continue this. Keep up the good work!

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Love it! I hope you'll continue it. Thx for sharing your talent! Hope more comes soon thanks

Blah blah blah boring bullshit. As per usual with you fucking morons.

which is it Daniel or Damien

which is it Dan