Strong writing and interesting sounding OCs. look forward.

I hope you update soon

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I LOVE IT!
Once again you write Bal SO well and I liked Evie's teasing about Ben's clothes lol
It usually takes quite a special story for me to be ok with OCs but this was SO well written and AMAZING that I don't mind Amy
Once again I LOVE IT!

I think that your story was very good and well written. I really enjoyed reading it. pinksakura271 actually recommended it to me and I’m glad she did. I hope that you expand upon the idea and continue with the story. I would love to read more of it. Keep up the great work.

This was so cute!

Love it

Oh yes Ben Evie is right. Your dressing casual mix Auradonian/Isle is getting along nicely. Of course Mal LOVES that dark leather on her Benny-Boo. Evie's mini rambling about Dizzy & Gil being chosen is cute. Now breath Fashion Queen, Ben no doubt trust your judgement advise does his Purplette Beauty. ;)

Evie that quick thinking of yours was too late. Ben already saw the purretty Pink portrait, no going back from that. True very true Mal's sketching is her outlet as fashion is Evie's. It's the girls magic with spells or potions. (Sweet Smile) Damn Blunette you got Ben's beastliness riled up good with those no touchy orders. No one can tell him what he can & can't do,,,,, WELL unless your Mal of course. (Giggles)

Mal calling Evie, Blueberry Evie knew it was BAD! Mal wouldn't call her that unless it was a dangerous situation unfolding. Back when the two were enemies nowhere near friends let alone sisters as they are now. Exactly Mal's temper is dangerous because it's quick & lethal but Amy's as dangerous more subtle. Amy could smile TOO sweetly than just stab you in the back, possibly literally. (Smug Smirk)

Glad it's all in the open now. Ben is completely on board with everything. He will love Amy as a little sister. As for Audrey, OHHH I already can feel Amy wanting to roost her like her beloved bacon!