I do have so clap for ye m8 this was a fun read u god me on edge with whole gene stealer drama and the whole family thing ...it was fitting end poor lass in the kind side of inquisition. woulda be better if she died at least after helping her dear brother with the last of her freewill..but alas u will serve mankind to atone for yer crimes againts it.

I was lost in the simple creepynrss of the tale... excellent!

If you like nature as a character of itself, mystery, oppresive, masrhmallow atmosphere, that' s a piece for you. Worth reading, quick, focused, simple yet powerful character motivation... 8.5/10

This is a perfect example of what a 40k horror story should be. I enjoyed every part of it, especially the final fight against the Tyranid. Thanks for writing it.

A nice and short story that I highly recommend.

Look, a beautiful story and only one review?

Its got nice characterisation, and good description, you can just see the swamp and Racitors. Maybe the plot is a little hackneyed, but great storytelling.

Woah! You re doing a great job in creating an atmosphere here, dont stop it !