Reviews for One in a Million |
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![]() ![]() Please update, I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, it starts brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for next update I love this story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() just found this and is just wonderful, the bond they had with each other, i hope you would return one day to finish this story and see were this bond will go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fun to read, keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will this be a TF story? Interesting to see how Steve and Blue bond. Steve and Blue have a bond that can never be broken. I hope this story contain be interesting where this bond will take Steve (the oc) and Blue. Can't wait for more chapters update real soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww! This is so sweet! I'd love to see more of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Só cute ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Silly typing mistake in my review of chapter 3, it should have been: (...) she shouldn't behave like a human in a dinosaur skin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No TFs in this story. Is better without it. Please updated. Great job. Keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, It's promising story and I'm curious where you will take Blue and Steve bond. I hope there will be no transformation, because that thing kills my suspension of disbelief literarly. If you planned to allow Blue to talk with Steve like humans do, I'd suggest to use some experimental device that's not perfect at the beginning and it will be improving over a few chapters due to exposure to velocirator's speach. Plus, keep her unique way of thinking so she can be destinguished as different sentient species, she should behave like a human in dinosaur skin. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() IIII LIKE IT! This is a good one, also is this going to be a TF story? If so then that will be AWESOME, I love TF stories, it just helps you escape from the laws and restrictions of humanity, although if it isn't a TF then that'll fine also. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So when you say love do you mean in the romantic sense or familial sense |