Reviews for The Goddess of Death
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 7 . 7/21
Actually fenris and fenrir are the same. Fenris is taken from fenrir's wolf. It was turned to fenris wolf. Wikipedia says so. Besides this is not normal mythology. If it was then hela would have been loki's daughter so you can imagine that fenris is not a child of loki either. And she really needs to get a better weapon later on. Maybe a spear would be good. Mjolnir is more thor's thing. A spear would fit her better.
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 6 . 7/21
...that was rattatosker wasn't it? Don't know if I spelled the name correct though.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/20
I absolutely love your story! I never thought about SI in Hela’s character. I love the way you portray her, not strong fork the very beginning but has the ambition to become better. I can’t wait until Thor and Loki are shown!
Addic7edReader chapter 12 . 7/19
thanks for this op really love Hela centric fanfics hard to look for well written ones, had fun reading this :) be safe and updates? pretty please
DLFangrill chapter 12 . 7/16
This is great! I really love where and how you're steering the story, the OCs are well written and I absolutely LOVE these types of OCs/SIs. The amount of world building you're making is amazing and that itself makes this story worthwhile. although the MCU has one of if not the most developed worlds with so many movies all building in the same universe, their depth isn't always the best. What you've done here is spectacular (and now I feel like a thesaurus spouting synonyms to "great" over and over again, but what can I do?) and you've basically seized the mere ideas and mentions from the movie and made this story your own.
There is one problem I've encountered while reading this though, around how old is Hela currently? I can't seem to grasp exactly how much time has passed between the chapters or even within the chapters. The same could be said for the other OCs, how old are they? I understood that she was just born in the first chapter and she was around 3 years old (I don't know if they are using Earth years or not) when Vor was first introduced to teach her. And then how many years passed until the first assassination attempt occurred? And then how many more when Frigga was inserted into her life? You haven't really stated how old was seen as coming-of-age and I have no idea if Hela is still a teenager or if shes already a young adult.
Anyway, I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter and am very excited to see what else you have in store for this story. Since Hela is occupied with the Economic project, around what time will Odin finally bring her into the war? Surely she is now old enough to participate if not shadow the generals (also why isn't Odin making her attend war meetings? Did he see her reluctance to battle since that moment in the weapons chamber? Won't that make him more determined for her to see things from his view or something?) And why are her friends allowed to participate in her project, also that Lucas dude, aren't they training to be einjerhar? Why are they allowed to shirk their duties at a time of war?
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 12 . 7/16
Aye!
EmilyWolf808 chapter 12 . 7/16
Absolutely love this story can’t wait to read more.
tylermech66 chapter 12 . 7/15
Again, one wonders how Asgard managed to defeat the Dark Elves at all, but no matter. We now have Hela to make Asgard great

but for now, i get the distinct feeling Hela's going to be quite busy fighting a war. Hoping for that greatsword!
sharingankakashi007 chapter 12 . 7/14
I haven't seen much angst yet in this story
Hope that will be the norm
Cos lemme tell you angst if it goes a little too far can be bad
Like real bad
Also getting flashbacks about old Harry potter stories with the angst tag

Anyway joking and half serious worries aside
I like that she's finally found some satisfaction in her life
And like guild idea
This is gonna change lots of stuff for Asgard
Like they're gonna be even more rich and powerful

Also about the war
I wonder what it is that drove the rest of the realms to fight Asgard

Always make use of your competent staff
And remember take refuge in audacity
This is a place where your reputation can do lots for you
So deal with the nobles, cripple them so they can never even consider going against you
puma1sunfire chapter 12 . 7/14
Love it. LOVE This story! It was very easy to get consumed once you get started. Was very interesting to see how this story has gone. Love how you are fleshing out Hela into something more than she has been portrayed in the Thor movie. Also love how you have slipped in all these little details you can easily expound upon later. Such as how Hela plans to tell half truths about herself and only parts ar that to the very few she trusts such as Vor and Frigga. How unobserved Earth/Midgard is by Asgard. The little interactions with Astrid and Hela saying she wants to visit places so Astrid will get to see Vanir. I can already see the future/upcoming fights with Odin over several things Hela is doing not to mention the upcoming wars Hela will be involved in and the fallout from that. So looking forward to Hela bitching out the All-Father once he gets tired of the War and wises the hell up unless Hela breaks before or after that point then it's all bets off.
chaosrin chapter 3 . 7/11
Glad you're not skipping straight into Thor and Loki's ear, this is her story, not theirs so I hope to see a lot of worldbuilding.
So looking forward to how she would wage war perhaps adding modern warfare in order to reform Asgard's armies against advanced races and star empires.
Also interested to see how she deal with advanced alien races and there got to be reasons why Asgard across the galaxy despite their low tech.

Did you read female Thor graphic novels?
I find its amusing low low tech warriors and magic kickass despite their enemies using laser and warships.
Silvermane1 chapter 12 . 7/7
Fantastic update
Imperial Guard 1337 chapter 12 . 7/7
Maybe try to bring guns to Asgard?

Warhammer 40k Space Marine weapons should do the trick! (especially from the Space Wolves)

And if they don't like Bolters, well... it's hard to say no to a chain-sword or a good chain-axe!
But i'm certain they love the Space Wolf Frost Blade!
Prodigal Knight chapter 12 . 7/6
One of the things I love about this story is you’ve spent so much time in the past establishing your characte rather than rushing off into canon. I’ve seen too many stories recently with SI/OC’s reborn in the first chapter and are legal age by the next starting the canon timeline. Frankly, those stories give no reason for why I sould care for the new character.

Whether it’s five-thousand or five million years before the Avengers, I’m very interested in seeing Hela make a greater impact on surroundings and make lasting changes to canon. For example, I was wondering if Hella will visit the wider universe, space and other planets specifically. From what I‘ve seen and read of the MCU, Asgard has limited interactions outside the Nine Realms and I would think she’d support a greater presence in the galaxy. Perhapes performing outreach to some planets, mediating in the Kree-Skrull War, run ins with individuals that she can lecture her brothers on. Maybe travel to Titan and meet a young Thanos? If nothing else, I could see her claiming Earth as under her protection to the wider galaxy to give pause to the Kree and Chitari.

I was also thinking of Sif and Volstagg’s visit to the Collector, how they mentioned the unwise practice of keeping multiple Infinity Stones in one place. However far back in time she is, besides the Aether, who’s to say the Infinity Stones are where they are in the movies? It be a nice touch for her to have some personal experience with them to draw upon in the future, maybe even wield one briefly with help of the Odin/Hela-Force.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/4
Okay why is she still acring likr she has to follow canon? She already fucked it up by becoming a nicer Hela. Also these are weapons that the Dwarves can make again she can either keep mjlnoir or not since it can't be canon anymore. Unless you're going to make Stormbreaker for Hela, what about Loki? He's going to be envious and even jealous that Thor gets her Hammer while he gets what, a sceptor or some daggers? You said he's going to be trained in weapons so I'm assuming Helas going to train him in a spear od some kind to match his lithe build
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