(Laughs) oh wow. You pulled off a beach episode without it being entirely fanservice! Im impressed!

Hm. Neo and pyrrha? It'll work out. Neo wont care about pyrrhas fame and pyrrha will entertain neo.

Merc and weiss? I can see that with this merc.

Poor em though. Sadly boys will be idiots. Poor ruby too. Yangs a tough cookie to surpass.

Neo and glynda discussing godmother terms. Thankfully it didnt turn violent. I wouldnt know who to root for.

Quite an interesting story you made here. Great work.

Hunters might as well be super models. The only exception are the shadow people from S1. And Ren as a girly pretty boy! "Point stands" as it is said in rwby, "hes not wrong." And ouch. Pyrrha didnt get a partner? But jaune does his thing and makes her feel normal and accepted in one conversation.

That interview though. Perfect!

Things are coming to a head.

Wow. Em's thief skills are on auto.

Also, that racoon and baby thing was an Incredibles 2 reference wanst it? Was the movie out when you posted this?

Love what touve done with the fic so far by the way. (Thumbs up)

(Snickers) i feel bad for velvet as cinder describes her. Sad thing is... shes not wrong.

That alley scene did not go how i expected. That end scene though? That was more like it and at same time worse cuz its *cinder and neo on the warpath!*

(Laughs) Roman's misunderstanding of Jaune is hilarious! Books, tournaments, hiking, rats and leaks. All things we and those involve know is actually innocent-to an extent- but Roman thinks is criminal.

And i love Neo's pov and her semblance face off while Jaune is oblivious to it. Her beating Em is a given. Em is good, but against Neo's solid illusions? No constest.

Awesome story read it in under 48 hours, the ship side story at the end of each chapter was also great and could have been a story of its own

just as hilarious and sappy as the first read

What a beautiful fucking fic. I'm so glad I read this after 'Stress Relief' since my heart couldn't take the ending. With the perfect blend of rom and com, drama, goodfeels, and of course the riveting analysis of shipping through the story of literally sailing ships. All in all, I can only say one thing: Cool story bro. For real tho the story was amazing and cute and funny and heartwarming and all that jazz. Thanks for the read.

COUER AL ARAN LMAOOOO

this story feels like a drunk blur

the authors note is so far, the best part of the story

(obviously joking) nah it could work

That moment when the authors note story is just as good as the main story. Damn you're a good writer

:)

nice