Reviews for Lauren Kaine: The Infernal Chosen
plums chapter 2 . 8/24
This feels really dragged out.
bobacoco chapter 6 . 6/17
please update soon. I hope Dumbledore suffer what he had done. But could you maybe send memories vitals to James and Lily to see how Petunia and Vernon treated their daughter.
Rawrking chapter 4 . 1/23/2019
kind of trash tbh you love waxing poetic about your OC being powerful and all but meh building level at best with medium magic resistance. she even ducked a killing curse ffs which shouldn't affect her b/c she has no soul...
Stratos263 chapter 6 . 12/29/2018
To be honest I never truly Voldemort believe deserve the power he got. Good luck lauren
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 5 . 11/8/2018
Oh, my, lovely work as always. It is just going to be one massacre after another, isn't it? Well, that's what I like so, keep up the amazing work. Figg got tortured...not that I mind, I always hated that she knew and didn't do anything, I would have been livid if I was in her position especially if she was a witness to all of her suffering. She may be an elderly woman, but those who do nothing, are just as evil as those who commit it. She had it coming. Makes me wonder how the Potters will react to their son trying to become a Lich? Probably shit themselves along with Albus' cocksuckers.
I just love that Moody is the voice of reason.
Now, I am off to read the rest of your works.
And yes, dude, your new story is awesome and I expect it to be done soon, probably be posted at the end of the month, knowing you.
MSala chapter 5 . 11/6/2018
brutal and mentally insane...i love it
Stratos263 chapter 5 . 11/5/2018
Good luck on your plan Lauren
Greer123 chapter 5 . 11/5/2018
Thank you for the new chapter of this story.
Michael Bourne chapter 5 . 11/5/2018
laruen kane 3 light side/ voldemort and his ilk zero
UnsanMusho chapter 5 . 11/5/2018
Very brutal as always though it's nice to see people actually joining Lauren's side and I really liked the part with Neville's parents.
quintuus chapter 4 . 10/27/2018
please update man. it is such a great story and the plot is just mind-blowing.
Stratos263 chapter 4 . 8/23/2018
I don’t see Voldemort becoming a Lich without heavy cost since he is very rotten
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 4 . 8/23/2018
The new chapter is awesome as always, now such a twist, another visit? Well, sure makes it interesting doesn't it? Tell me, who do you think would win in an all-out brawl? Considering both Lauren and Lilith are heavy hitters and blunt as can be, but I feel Lilith has more technique in comparison to Lauren who I think has more power. But just a thought, I don't want it in the story anyway, I still need to get to the Hogwarts, but I am trying to wrap up how both Drake and Jake got into Voldemort's care in the first place and a peak on how dangerous Lilith can be technique-wise. Spoiler...sorry. Moving on, the story is awesome, the battle between Lauren and paladins was sweet and Voldemort is planning on becoming a Lich? Yeesh~, that is not going to end well, considering the fact it's just a slaughter in Overlord 3, ep. 7, just a damn slaughter with a hint of torture. Keep it up, you awesome bastard.
Sorry for the wait, I'm finally back, although I'll crash after I finish Chaos' new update.
Later
~Kourtney Uzu Yato
P.S. - 10/10
Greer123 chapter 4 . 8/23/2018
Looks like Lauren is still killing her enemies at a rapid pasce.
Phoedra135 chapter 4 . 8/23/2018
uh I think you submitted the wrong chapter to this story
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