What other kingdoms? what other kings? humanity is unified atthis 'time period' as per his legend.

ALso your chapter length is less than 40% of what is written, all that follow in blod is filler. word count say 80 000 but it is probably around 30 000 at best considering all the system and useless info. Also, even before he is 1 year old his main concern is about who he will friik with and if he should take a harem or not -_- seriously... that's what you are more concerned with?

This is not naruto... I highly doubt that they are going to spit any elements from their mouths. And there was very much stupidity in most of these stuff... I mean seriously? You forgot 100 charisma bonus. And your bonuses suck... especially the DEX one. C'mon man! Atleast give him better reflexes or precognition! Urgh... you suck at some of this.

And then... he never came back.

Tiamat backstory is different, but oh well this was made in 2018 before fgo became an anime and gained notoriety

Please update this story soon..Please!

I didn't know summer Ian gods were into netorare shit!

Okay so the last fight was forced af ad ruined the story... I mea rly.. it was a sad af attempted at following canon

He could have easily avoided being tossed around with his ability to literally choose when he to be knocked away. He could have easily ended it then and there by using one of his swords that have unhealable wounds. He wasn't even using his full power and he lost because of that. You made him weaker his chapter than he ever was in any of the other chapters. I am disappointed that you had to Nerf him in order to make the story progress.

Update!

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Fucking just write 1/2 STR for the attack value of the sickle sword.

I am also 99.9% sure they used spears as well, since it's a weapon that has always been alongside humanity since the stone age and is easy to become proficient with.

the average being 35 will most likely mean that an equal amount of people live to the age of 69 as the amount of people who die at the age of 1

An interesting story so far. Not half bad, really. You've done your research.

Stories like this is the reason I love reading. Keep up the good work and update soon please

Update please

The ability Rallier specifies that allies will recieve 200% morality and 200% confidence. This is a significant issue. The character did practically nothing to gain this power. Furthermore, this almost ensures loyalty among neutral and perhaps even antagonistic allies(merceneries, temporary alliances). The 50% damage boost is also grossly overpowered, as it entails an entire army or characters such as Enkidu(allies) to become vastly stronger at little to no cost.

His behavior towards the elder, Dada was uncalled for. The exulted buff, along with his incredibly high charisma should entail absolute loyalty from Dada and the other elders. Gilg could've and should've at least heard the request out. Leaving out formalities(which is considerably trivial for someone of his circumstances), Gilg has evidently less experience than any of the elders(if only in implementation and consideration of practicality).