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...fucking hell. This is one of the most awesome naruto's ever! OMG! NARUTO WAS FRICKIN AWESOME! YAAAA! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL! BOO YAA! The next world is sooo fucked...

I really enjoyed this. I’m actually very curious to see how a sequel with Naruto, Ilya, and Sakura in the elemental nations would work out. Or maybe an epilogue where an immortal and fully grown Naruto, Illya, and Sakura or something combination show up to see Rin and Saber at the clock tower. Anyway I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I have enjoyed reading it. I can’t wait to see what you’ll write next.

-Genesis09

So lemme get this straight, naruto crushes shirou's dreams of being a hero in order to to stop his reality marbel bur he has his own marbel...

Everyone just talks shit about shirou huh? I didn't think he was that bad, i mean i know that in THIS world he is a bit out of place but in MANY other worlds that kind of thinking would be appreciated...how the hell did naruto know he had a realty marble? 1 it isn't complete. 2 it isn't active. 3 Shirou himself doesn't know about it. SO HOW?!

Oh fuck OFF Naruto, you just stopped his growth! The best fate protagonist! Wtf?! (Lets face it he is very famous.) Heroic spirit Emiya, that shit just SOUNDS cool. Also how is he not a magus or whatever? Don't you need to have magic circuits to use magic? Ik your trying to say he is using his nerves as a substitute...but how would he even know how to do that if he didn't have circuits of his own?

Despite it being a short read, I legitimately enjoyed reading this. It was hilarious how easy and quick Naruto curbstomped every single Servant there, LOL. It’s actually how I think it would realistically go if Naruto actually is summoned as a Servant. As powerful as the Servants are, they don’t stand a chance against someone who can move multiple times faster than the speed of light. Especially since their movements can still be tracked by other Magus, inferring their comparably slower speed.

I am a bit bummed though, that I can’t read the Epilogue. I would’ve liked to read the new lives of Sakura, Illya and Naruto. Still, I’ve really enjoyed this story. You deserve this Favorite.

Reviewing again sorry not sorry.

I just want to say that I don't have anything against OP narutos and I know this fanfic isn't meant to be taken seriously for disregarding some of Nasuverse rules and whatever.

I realize what about this fanfic rubs me the wrong way. It wasn't just the blatant Shirou dissing and bashing. It was how you based and twisted this Servant Naruto from Canon Naruto.

I mean correct if I am wrong, but is this Servant Naruto's legends are almost entirely based on Canon Naruto's history, with what looks a little alteration here and there in the Naruto's canon history?

If yes, than you have disrespected Naruto by turning him into a callous killer in fanfic. After all, one of his accomplishments is that he never had killed, which is unusual for a ninja. He didn't have to kill the other Servants that stand against him to have his wish, he would have found another way without killing if he was truly OP.

He could have convinced Illya to have her Berserker to stand down while trying to save her from her fate as well as help her put aside her misplaced hatred. He would tried to help Shirou with his survivor guilt. All while doing the other good things he did in fanfic.

But he didn't. I wouldn't have a problem if this Servant Naruto came from a timeline where a Naruto somehow manage to gain the same strength and similar accomplishments as Canon Naruto, has killed like a professional ninja while somehow manage to start some kind of world peace by spilling some blood to achieve it thus would be fitting for the class of Assassin, Servant of MURDER.

Sorry not sorry for this little rant which might be a waste of space here.

I don’t think many people realize how much stronger Eos Naruto is compared to servants

Loved it. Loved all of it.

gudo. I was looking forward to Rin's reactions to seeing the toughest moments of naruto life through the dream cycle, but otherwise the story was pretty satisfying, who cares about possible plot holes when the story is good? only beginners worry about it, still don't understand how hard it is to find a good fic nowadays, there are few authors who write seriously fanfic...
I loved the story and would love to see a sequel, I like to imagine what their lives would be like from there, and EMIYA's interaction with naruto shows a good integration into the world of crossover, I'm not quite sure how to explain what I meant by that, but that's it

good point. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
GUDO

I wonder just how big Naruto will make his legend after reincarnating.

And just how terrifying his stats would be after that.

Also wondering just how literal Gilgamesh's remark of Naruto being his ancestor is...

Damn, that was a great read for a break from reading so many super serious fics lol. I would love to read somebody's take on a sequel to this tbh lol. Thanks for the great read!