| Reviews for Fatherhood |
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   Emz2684 chapter 33 . 3/16 hope we get more chapters |
| Leahrs chapter 14 . 11/27/2019 all the feels |
| Barson4Ever chapter 4 . 11/22/2019 Whats wrong with the front? |
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/27/2019 Very good story |
| Barson4Ever chapter 13 . 10/11/2018 will you be continuing this fic on here? |
| H chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 This story is fantastic and I was so excited to see more but for some reason the chapters have gone backwards. Guest, you are correct about the structure of this story but there is a difference between constructive criticism and criticism. You were just being an ass. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/2/2018 Not sure what’s going on when you updated but you originally had 13 chapters now it shows 12 when we should see a 14th btw I do love this story it’s awesome need more of it lol |
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/2/2018 Monkey see, monkey do. Don’t you notice people separate dialogue from narration to avoid blurring things together? I assume you’ve read books or at least fanfiction that’s written properly? |
| MsNYC chapter 18 . 8/30/2018 Oh this these two chapters were great... I especially love the second one with the proposal... can’t wait for everyone else’s reaction... more or less Lucia... great update! |
| Lyssa813 chapter 18 . 8/30/2018 Omg! I’m so happy! What a nice date night and what a proposal! I love that he had Fin help him! |
| Lyssa813 chapter 17 . 8/30/2018 This ch was so adorable! I love that Jake and sonny connected so quickly! I’m glad Raf realized he’s been inadvertently neglecting Olivia and that he needs to fix the situation. He knows her so well with those little notes he put in the box and around the apartment. Can’t wait to see what he has planned! |
| Windswept73 chapter 18 . 8/30/2018 Loved it |
| BJ chapter 18 . 8/30/2018 This was another sweet and lovely chapter. |
| BJ chapter 17 . 8/30/2018 This was very sweet and lovely. |
| Kelli Annette Holder chapter 18 . 8/29/2018 Oh my! Nice little family coming along! I love it! |
