Hi! I wanted to let you know that this is an awesome story. I appreciate the low amounts of smut. It would be awesome of I could read more! much love and thank you!

Delilah

PS Please don't kill Tony!

Tony said that she has five soulmates, but he doesn't know that yet because she only said plural when referring to her soulmarks, not how many she had. Also, concerning the dialogue, there should be a comma before end quotations if you are using tags, and a period if you are not. (A tag is when you end dialogue with 'she said', 'she asked', 'he exclaimed' etc.) For example,

"Maybe you should work on that," she told him as she stood up from the desk making her way out of the office.

Also, if your putting an action in the middle of dialogue, you can either use the same comma technique, or use hypens. For example,

"Great, follow me. I'm Happy by the way," he extended his hand and she shook it, "Head of Security," he confirmed and she followed him to the elevator.

or;

"Great, follow me. I'm Happy by the way-" he extended his hand and she shook it, "-Head of Security," he confirmed and she followed him to the elevator.

Also, when a character is addressing another in dialogue, you have to put a comma before their name or term of address. For example,

"What do you expect me to say, Pep?"

I hope I don't sound snotty or anything, I just wanted to correct some of the continuity and grammatical mistakes I noted when reading. I wish people had left me comments like this when I started writing so I've been trying to give back as much as I can. If you find these annoying, please just tell me and I'll stop.

i miss jessica and the guys so muchhhhh

please comeback

Hope you update soon. story is really good! :)

pleaseee update soonnnn... I missed them all

Ah, things are ha and Loki gets to do something (hopefully).

love it please update

Jessica's not doing well. There's no progress and everything is still f***ed up.

Will she ever get to spend any time with Bucky? They see each other, say hi, and then one of them has to leave!

Now what?

Please update

this is from a movie with Chris Evans in it isn't it

Jessica is home, Tony is gone and Ross still has something stuck up where the sun doesn't ever shine. When things seem to be better, it's just pointing out that it could get worst.

nice. can't wait for more.