are you updating any more?

"The Lee Clan"... lmfao

It took Kazuki so long to realize he wasn’t in Konoha yet *snicker*.

Can understand Koshiro. Still surprised even now that Kushina’s parents sent her alone to Konoha to be their Jinchuuriki. Harsh. And why am I getting the feeling that Kazuki’s parents are dead people walking? So dead, right? And precious Uzu. Also so dead. TT_TT
Kazuki better save some damn Uzumaki relics or knowledge or something! Too bad he doesn’t have his gamer abilities yet. I will say, though, this is all exciting to read in a sort of horrifying way, especially knowing Uzu’s coming fate. Cough. Neji, did you say something?

Thank you for writing (especially because I love reading)

(Wait, you say I am allowed to bitch? Aha! Okay! Kazuki’s name: not my favorite. Also: really weird to see gamer type character with parents. Just saying. Not your fault though that I read too many orphan fics. And another thing: missing Konoha even if I theoretically like Uzu. And: this means Kazuki will know younger, totally less cool Kakashi. Sad times. Time skip!)

In all seriousness, whatever you decide, it will be a pleasure to read I am sure. Good luck! :D

Why yes, I do love longer chapters even if the frequency is less.

There can never be enough Fūinjutsu in fanfics.

Cough. Poor Kazuki. At least he’s a good sport about it all. Am laughing in horror/amusement at this whole second chapter and your choice to keep the random world Genjutsu that pop up or whatever they are and the super expressive faces. Terrifying and hilarious.

And also, now thinking heavily about a super detailed birth Genjutsu. The horror. Too bad Kazuki probably won’t be a genjutsu specialist. Missed opportunity. Huff.

Considering how much I like to reread fics I like, it’s nice to hear you also sometimes like to rewrite stuff.

Interesting! I’d love to see what happens next :)

Mas mas more more

are u planning to have some uzumaki elders to survive...? to teach seals to gamer boy?

The chapters are too short to leave enough of an impression to remember what the previous ones were about within the time frame of the updates...

The verbal tic being a uzumaki hereditary thing is just ugh its weird enough that naruto had it from his mom. What's next an uzumaki that says dattebazors? Dattebashit? Datteanal? You really need to consider what you want from your story. As it is with the short chapters and little to no progress as well as spending time on random irrelevant detail, it's not working out.

Ps. Uzumaki mito was reserved, strict and had no tic

At the pace your going you'll sent kazuki to the academy at chapter 20. I really shudder to think this might be one of those fics...

You should of just skipped this chapter it has nothing going for it

Cliche why not go with Nara or Inuzuka at least it would be interesting than

Good story so far! Can wait to see a seal master in action. Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter!

I prefer longer ones myself.

I highly disagree with your opinion that uzumaki were 'hot headed'!
Seriously, just look at an uzumaki not descended from Kushina.
Who was a spoiled, abandoned princess that was given away, and thus not the golden standard for uzumaki. And then look at her son, an orphan acting out for attention, that also was discriminated against and not properly taught. And kushina's 'hot headed' ness was more a comedic woman's rage.