Awesome 2nd chapter!

I love Hank for listening and believing his boy and for recusing to allow him to leave, telling him he's there to help.
Connor's pain and fear was so painful to read...so well written and relatable, but painful.

I love the hug. It's so heartwarming.

Great work! *goes looking for sequels*

Awesome, but so sad. And enraging...AMANDA, you goddamn b*tch! *furious*

Poor Connor *cry*

So glad Hank is willing to listen. And is still worried about the kid. Connor does have that puppy dog look down pat...

Dawwwwwww. That was cute.

Aw, poor Connor. I'm really enjoying this story so far, very intriguing

Wait, what? The end? It only just begun!
Okay, no. That was a full story. That was nice. I can't help but want to see more everytime ' Anyway, thanks for that!

Well, I thank you for writing this in English or I wouldn't have been able to read your story! As I think your native tongue is German, and I barely speak a word or two of it. Also, I don't think I saw any mistake, but English isn't my mother tongue either, so...
Anyway, that was an interesting beginning, let's see what comes next, I see there's a chapter 2 asking me to read it :3

You did a great job with this story! Hope to see more from you! :]

You did a wonderful job, if there were spelling and grammer errors I didn't notice them. Keep it up! (I know their voices are the best). OOO, i dont know if you've gotten to the Connor is a siper thing but you should explore the scent he and Hank share on the rooftop (sorry if its spoliers). I'd be interested to see where you take it.

This was very interesting. This little story was great, and I really enjoyed it!

awwe cute! I love their father son relationship

Yay! Made me feel all fluffy!

love! perfect ending!

so good! also I never would have guessed english isn't your native language! please update soon!