Reviews for Entropy
ThomasSlik chapter 6 . 7/7
My god the story's sooo good and that cliffhanger is killing me, please update this story
Guest chapter 6 . 3/2
I found this story yesterday and I'm a solutely in love with it Im not sure if there are any plans to continue this, but I'd love to read more
Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2019
FUCK YOU GABRIEL! YOU COULDN'T HAVE LET THEM HAVE BIT OF MAKE-OUT SESSION!
The Pure-Blooded Aristocrat chapter 6 . 8/25/2019
What's up why no more updates?
Hkt29 chapter 6 . 5/21/2019
So Emilie's soul ended inside the peacock kwami.

Now that they know that she is not in the After Life they will be more willingly to talk with Gabriel.
Hkt29 chapter 5 . 5/20/2019
Well finally she found out his identity and Gabriel decided to attack Marinette, it's surprising that he didn't do it before.
Hkt29 chapter 4 . 5/20/2019
Good work with Adrien's point of view and his decission to have Marinette guessing his identity and great twist at the end with Gabriel finding out his secret identity and revealing his.
Hkt29 chapter 3 . 5/20/2019
Finally she wants to know who he is, she will get a nice surprise.
Hkt29 chapter 2 . 5/20/2019
With Chloe's attitude it's clear that we won't see Queen Bee anymore.

I'm surprised that Marinette and her parents didn't try to come with a deal before going to court, as soon as the emancipation threat became real they should have accepted for her to be Ladybug. Now there is a wound between that will take time to heal and withouth her living with them for their protection they will be more vulnerable to attacks.

Loved Marinette's reaction when she found out that Adrien shipped Ladybug and Chat.

About money, Marinette should try to start an online store to sell her designs, her talent was already acknowledged by Adrien and Chloe's parents, big names in the fashion business and Jagged Stone. The reveal that she is Ladybug will make the demand for her job extremely high.
Hkt29 chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
Excellent idea.

While I can see Marinette's parents getting angry and concerned that their daughter risks her life in regular basics I can't imagine the situation escalating to the point of her having to leave home and emancipate herself.
rebekahpsweatman81 chapter 6 . 5/15/2019
I need more, please tell me that there's more
flakeshake07 chapter 6 . 5/11/2019
oh wow! im hooked haha. really curious to see where this goes! thanks for sharing!:)
GreyCatsidhe chapter 6 . 5/6/2019
I've really enjoyed this story thus far. Very interesting reveal, and I love how you've kept the suspense going. I look forward to more when you are able. Thank you!
miisfxrtune chapter 6 . 4/8/2019
I have two words: holy shit
Sayaka M chapter 6 . 3/4/2019
You’ve done a really good job with this story. While you do have a few typos here and there, I love your writing style. Keep up the good work.
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