| Reviews for The Devil that loves fire |
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   rufus264 chapter 7 . 5/29 Great chapter |
| Natha Scarlet chapter 7 . 5/29 Next |
| rufus264 chapter 6 . 4/29 Great chapter |
| rufus264 chapter 5 . 11/26/2018 Great chapter |
| luxhead9952 chapter 4 . 10/1/2018 dude I really like the story but the chapters are a bit short. over all I love it! |
| UchihaAngel98 chapter 4 . 8/20/2018 Love it! It was a little short but it was great! Hope you add some lemons in future chapters ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) Can't wait for more! :) |
| rufus264 chapter 4 . 8/19/2018 Great first date for the two |
| rufus264 chapter 3 . 7/21/2018 Awesome chapter |
| rufus264 chapter 2 . 7/21/2018 Nice chapter |
| BlindLight98 chapter 3 . 7/21/2018 Goox chaoter but I noticed u used a wrong word. Instead of "Mira had Finally expected that" it should say "Mira had finally accepted that" |
| Karyuu no Benri chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 Good chapter! |
| shadow wolf sage chapter 1 . 7/16/2018 I love you author~sama. Not many people writing good NaMi fanfictions. and even less that start when they were kids. so thank you and please continue, if not for me then for the pairing that should have been canon |
| UchihaAngel98 chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 Love it! Great start! NaMi is my favorite ship, I've always thought that Mira had feelings for Natsu when they were kids. Anyways, can't wait for more! Hope you update soon! |
| rufus264 chapter 1 . 7/14/2018 Awesome chapter |
| Lordlexx chapter 1 . 7/14/2018 1st. An A grade for NaMi. Always the best decision. 2nd. Good start. It's really short though. I know it's hard to get the thoughts into words and it seems like its going to be more words than it is, but if you set yourself a minimum limit and force yourself to stick to it, it starts to flow better and becomes habit. 3rd. You forgot to capitalize the start of the dialogues most of the time. Also dont have them in the middle of the paragraphs all the time, it's fine to have it on it's own line. 4th. Your ending was rushed and you destroyed all sense of foreshadowing and suspense. You shoulda kept the wish a secret until later. Overall: Great job, keep it up and your story will flourish nicely. |
