please update and finish this story i love it

Side note I always wonder if tomorrow Angel slept with Buffy would Angelus really return?
That is the theory right but sooooo many loopholes can and may have occurred from that time to now!
Especially after Buffy "died"
Maybe the perfect happiness had to do with her giving her virginity
Spike with a chip wasn't suppose to hurt but he did Buffy (post death) I mean just because it's true doesn't mean a fact that was once true can't change especially with Buffy dying coming back...

Neither would test the theory but I just feel like the soul being the reason is weak
We all know it's just a plot to keep B/A apart and it was great but doesn't mean it should be unending for them. And be an excuse forever...

Hell when W souled him she was young and new to power now imagine the loops or changes W could alone do to make sure risking Angelus would never happen!

Love where this story is going

is cordelia still a seer? I don't remember if you have stated one way or the other jist calling her a seer and I don't remember her having a vision in this story. Just wondering.

Hmm, some nicely emotional conversations in this one - the start with Kate and Lindsey was pretty positive, and then when everyone else came in, everything went to hell in an instant! Lindsey's confession was good, and I liked Buffy's guilty reaction when she was called out on her bad judgment call. Hope we see more soon!

Oh crap I thought buffy was goin to rip the guys head off

Pretty cool that you updated so soon, on my birthday no less. Keep the updates coming.

Hope things get better

That was a nice conversation between Buffy and Cordelia, two screwed-up women having an emotional heart to heart...and that was some great action scenes with Angel fighting his opponents! Of course, we knew he was gonna win, but the order of his kills did surprise me, I thought Malik would be the last (standard formula of the lesser enemies die first). Looking forward to seeing more soon!

I just binged your whole fanfic, and I gotta say it's pretty good.

Wow things ain't looking good for buffy the scoobies and the fang gang

Wonder if buffy can come back from this

I liked the "Falcon Crest" reference, always did - and there was a spelling error not long afterwards, 'White Hates', you might wanna fix that. The re-telling of Buffy getting knocked out by Caleb wasn't too bad, but I found Angel's battle more interesting, to be honest. And then for the return to the vineyard, Lindsey's reaction to seeing Caleb again was brilliantly described! Ditto the appearance of Dru, Pearl, Nash and the Beast during the battle. Hmm, the whole 'cutting the puppet strings' was a nice metaphor by Malik in Angel's battle, too. But the best part was Dawn coming in at the vineyard with the "GET AWAY FROM HER!" 'tude, and Buffy's shock at Little Sister coming in to save the day!

And then came the scene I'd been waiting for - Xander versus Caleb. Damn! Poor guy still needlessly got his eye gouged out. I'm disappointed mainly because I couldn't understand why that happened - Dawn was close enough she could have zapped Caleb with those green lasers coming out of her eyes, couldn't she? And Faith - I couldn't believe that part of the chapter where the good guys just *forgot* her, in the mad scramble to get away! Well, it was definitely unexpected, so kudos to you on the surprise factor - especially where Faith survived (if she did). And Angel's about to end up dust? And why exactly is the First not wearing Jasmine's body anymore? As always, I hope you update again soon!

Nice update as always, I liked Dawn's confrontation with Giles (and later, her decision to head out to the vineyard with Connor in tow). I also liked Angel's meeting with the dead Champions - as you say, less monologue-banter, more fighting! Plus the Xander/Cordelia scene, and Xander's speech to the troops about Buffy, and Xander siding with Andrew about Godzilla - great stuff! I also liked how Lindsey was the one who muttered they were all going to die in this AU. Looking forward to the big showdown, and seeing if anyone actually gets an eye gouged out.

cant wait to see more lets not keep us waiting

really enjoying this story! hope Buffy and Angel get some form of happiness together!