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Firestar001 chapter 6 . 7/20
I’ve been re-reading the story and looking at the reviews. I think Zwei would be a good idea to add in to help with the grief. Although when V4 ends, I do think Qrow would be a good person to have show up. I mean, the only ‘secrets’ Qrow would even have from the gang by then would be Ozpin’s reincarnation, him turning into a bird, and probably where Raven’s camp is.

I EXPECT to have Penny show up after the first episode of V7. She’s too innocent to NOT have show up, plus she becomes the winter maiden. I can’t wait to see where else this will go.
a8 chapter 44 . 7/19
can not wait for more. please update as soon as possible
Guest chapter 44 . 7/16
I can’t wait to see their reaction to the end of the season and Oscar’s relevance. On a side note, when are you crossposting PvP over from Spacebattles?
myfirsymask chapter 44 . 7/15
can't wait for more. please update as soon as possible
myfirsymask chapter 44 . 7/12
Can't wait to read more. This is a great and well written fanfic. I'm really looking for the reaction to PyrrhaPenny deaths and the whole Oscar is Ozpin thing.
Monster King chapter 42 . 7/9
Awesomeness please continue
a8 chapter 1 . 6/19
a great story keep going
BowmanW chapter 8 . 6/13
Honestly, rereading this now, I am finding it really hard to read the initial few chapters. Everyone keeps taking shots at each other for no reason while you have Pyrrha is acting like an immature child throughout most of the chapters.

I dislike both Jaune and her in the original work. It annoys me when I see Pyrrha defending Jaune by saying absolutely outrageous things, like seriously, when has Jaune EVER been a good leader in any of the initial volumes? She gets angry at anything and is very much insane in this fanfiction. If I recall correctly, I think she attacks Weiss later on with a lethal attack because of something stupid and everyone just seems to shrug it off, but that could have just been from another fanfiction that was similar.

Honestly, the only characters I actually felt were amazingly written in this was Weiss, Ruby, Nora and Ren. Nora, because her mental struggles are actually shown and are very well tackled and Weiss because she clearly shows development at quite a few moments in this fanfiction. The fact that everyone keeps taking shots at each other, sometimes with hostility, for very little reason, and Pyrrha just being a colossal dunce, really lowers my enjoyment of this fanfiction.

Still, it's very well written beyond that, and I find this fanfiction very entertaining whenever the characters aren't being toxic.
Dark Serpent Cat chapter 44 . 6/13
Recently caught up and I was hoping to make a suggestion even if it might be too late. I think it might be helpful for the group if Zwei was brought in. Things are about to get very dark and difficult for the group and, in my experience, having a pet can help in such moments. Not only by giving comfort and something fluffy to hug, but also Zwei is intelligent and might do something to try and cheer the group up.
Guest chapter 44 . 6/11
I am a big fan of how you put this in.

Right now, I crave the next part: episode 10 of Volume 3, or the new World of Remnant.

Yes, I have read on the forums as well.

Things I want to see:

Penny reacting to her own death
Oscar reacting to being Ozpin
Ilia/Ghira reacting to what Adam did
Taiyang or Qrow as a possible next character reacting to everything
Ruby reacting to Silver Eyes
Maria Calavera
Klein Sieben

Things I expect to see:
Reaction to Velvet’s Anesidora
Reaction to Salem
Reaction to the poor logic of the embargo
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11
It’s funny now that we know the Relic of Choice shows the future, presumably it teamed up with Jinn to take matters into its own hands
Winters queen chapter 44 . 6/10
To - Turniphater
Please update soon I know you’ve just updated but before this last one you didn’t update for five months and i don’t mean to be pushy but I really want to see the end of volume 3 so please update soon thank you

Sincerely,
Winter’s queen
CeruleanLancer chapter 40 . 6/9
Love the fic but they always seem to guess EXACTLY what is going to happen. They somehow knew that Ozpin had a crew dedicated to preventing war. That's kind of a leap. Even worse Blake somehow guessed they were going to give a darker perspective on Penny. Sure it's obvious they were going to use Penny in their plans but Blake said EXACTLY what happens.

Just because we know what's going to happen it doesn't mean they should be able to guess it too. I love when they make a logical but wrong guess. Or a completely logical correct guess that doesn't go through any leaps. And I especially love the major reveal reactions.

You should write more of their dialogue, I hate when they say "We should talk about this later" No they should talk about it now! I love this fic so much and can't wait for volume 6 ep 3. That reaction is going to be amazing but man... writing long episode reaction really wears down on you. I shouldn't complain because RvB episodes are short but even 7 minute episode wear on me.

Can't wait to see where this fic goes, love it and glad you've stuck with it. You inspired my own fic and I love what you've done with this fic.
Joanne Frances Tiano Cajilig chapter 44 . 6/9
This story is awesome! So much feels & drama but the tears are coming up...
CeruleanLancer chapter 30 . 6/8
woops accidentally reviewed as a guest. Anyway many were upset over the moons destruction reveal. I had no problems with it I thought it was well done.
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