Yooooo

This some good shit

Wow, Johannes sounds like the most charismatic dude in the world. Natural born leader type of shit, and I ain't mad at it. Also, your grammar is pretty damn great for someone who's primary language isn't English. Hell, a lot of these authors who are English native speakers can't write for shit! But you're doing a hell of a good job so far :).

I have been obsessed with Bloodborne stories. This isn't my favorite, but I am enjoying it.

Those soldiers are infinitely more relatable and badass than the huntsmen and huntresses.

Happy see back .
Reading this make thing of my five Ocs and idea had for a cross over.

damn. that's how to write a semi Eldritch entity. my complements. best I could come up with was being illogical.

Interesting story and concepts, excited to see how it pans out

Wow this is a pretty well written story I Shall enjoy reading it

Great and quit interesting read keep it up .

Other group monster you bring in would be the Eldrazi of MTG universe .they how devour worlds Ulamog the endless Hunger ,Kozilek the great distortion ,Emrakul the promised End .

One Hunter would teach and watch Hunter to come through dream with his silver eyes ,one Hunter with beasts savagery he would master father the Faunus ,Noble Cursed by blood master ruins gift to his successor descendants line ward over cursed caste of his birt,Paliden would ward remains of church of blood with righteous fire ,and finally the wise scholar how would ascnd warding them from elder one dark places .

Make think own Ocs Hunter ,the noble ,paliden ,and the scholar .One would become the beast father of Faunus ,One cursed by blood but noble by heart dwelling in north ,One to dwell in dream to aid those that hunt ,and last to become worm of dream ward world from those beyond .

If need any Ocs let me know have some might like make interesting allies and terrifying Villians .

I decided to read this on a whim, but have found myself very invested! I especially like your portrayal of the Good Hunter - you did a great job making him appear 'larger than life' and truly otherworldly from the perspective of others, if that makes sense. Really loving the direction this is heading in, looking forward to future chapters :)

very enjoyable after the first err chapter/authors note