can’t wait for the next chapter

OKAY HONESTLY. I’M LIKING THIS PROGRESS BUT I HATE MYSELF CAUSE I LOWKEY WANT LUCY IN THIS NOW SEEING HOW SHE IS TRYING TO HELL NATSU AS WELL OMG OMG. But continue updating! It’s amazing hehe. Can’t wait for Mira to come into the picture

I'd sincerely prefer you not to use Japanese.. well really for anything unless it's a proper noun. With the exception of like 3 characters, theres noone of oriental decent, thus the likelyhood of them using Japanese is nil. Your story is in English, keep it that way.

Great chapter

Yo Strike! If you need encouraging just remember you got us who give you reviews... and PM me if you need moral help... I might be bad author... but I can help those who can be better than me to move on!

Is it me or is chapter 2 and 3 the same? Anyways why not have Erza, Mira, Lucy and Lisanna. Honestly love those 4 girls and I can’t imagine them with anyone but Natsu. It’s okay for not updating! I like your story and I hope to see updates when you are feeling better! Can’t wait to see what you have in store for us!

This seems like a great beginning to a fanfiction. I'll have to vote for NaMi, as NaZa isn't something I can get behind. I believe I can be a good Beta, should you choose to accept my... inconsistent work ethic. I would also like to recommend Grammarly to you, as it is a computer-based editing service available as a chrome extension (for free), so it is more likely to pick up mistakes than a human, but cannot really judge uncommon word usage.

-TurboWolf

I vote marvis and erza becase natsu promise zeref he would make marvis HAPPY. is Eileen dead

I wouldn't mind NaMiza, it'd be quite interesting actually

I vote for NaMiZa

Natsu x Erza is my life. Go in that direction pls

So they just watched as Erza was tossed around

I would prefer it to be nami but namiza also sounds good as long as Mira is in it

Great chapter

NaMiZa!