More! Do hope all is okay so far least.
Heh, dont know why. But since Ash does have a lot of Psychics. Can he have Sabrina or Caitlin of the Elite Four as a family member? Would be funny twist right having someone know what hes thinking and tease him for it.
Guessing he picked up the White Stone ?

Hmm was the item Ash scooped up the Light Stone? Or the Dark?
Good luck with this! Cant wait to see more when able.
Heh, Rosa has a crush

Great to see a new chapter

Please update

Welcome back I'm glad to see this story finally got a new chapter after all this time I thought at first it was already abandoned before the story even begun but I'm glad that's not the case and it was a interesting chapter to and also do you plan to have the events from black 2 and white 2 happen in this story to and at a later time ash Rosa and future campaigns meet up with Hilda to and have her possibly be a campaign of ash and I know this is a ash x Rosa story but I can't help but feel Rosa is coming to have a bit of competition for ashs heart because if Hilda meets up with ash I can see her develop a crush on ash to because of the kind of guy ash is especially how he has his ways of making girls fall for him without him realizing it because of his densenes but I hope in this story ash isn't dense and is more mature and smarter in this story

I have been waiting for a new chapter from this story for months I'm glad it's finally updated and hopefully gets updated more offton because it's very rare seeing a story where ash and Rosa are even in the same story together especially when their the main pairing here I'm looking forward to the next chapter if it comes sooner rather than later

I'm glad to see the paring for this story is ash x Rosa there an extremely rare paring and I'm excited to read the next chapter and hopefully it comes soon because I'm ready to Read more and can you try to make the chapters more longer please

Great chapter like the pairing too

Please update

Can you try to make the chapters a little longer please it is good chapter but I feel the length needs to be a little longer than this

Nice great job and for once I finally see a very rare paring we never really see on the fanfic website ash x Rosa a type of paring that does interest me and been waiting for a long time for a fanfic to have them as a main pairing thank you very much for adding them and can you have ash bring back some of his older Pokemon he caught from hoenn sinnoh johto and Kanto

Thank you for making the paring ash x Rosa it's very rare we see those two together I have been waiting a very long time for a fanfic where a story features them as a main pairing and great chapter keep up the good work looking forward to next chapter

Nice chapter

Well, was bummed your other story is ditched, but interested to see what happens here! Do hope you're able to return when you can! (And that it is not forever)
Wonder what has happened over the years?
Has Team Rocket fallen?
Cypher?
Magma?
Has he turned their goals to that for good? That would be interesting twist. Instead of them being eliminated. They now work to improve the world
Cant wait for more!

(Hey! I’m doing a round of reviews around the site, hoping to help give people constructive criticism instead of just vague appreciation or flames.)

Hello I'm here to point out everything this guy basically did wrong. See he's a troll who goes around giving bad advice.

(don’t think you should use single quotation marks for thought, though)

Single quotation marks have a verify of users. Being used for thought depends on the writers preference. Most use it for though while they used italic for the words within sentences.

(Don’t use ellipses (or just two dots, as is the case here) so much to indicate a scene change)

Actually you can use anything as a change scene if it's on its own. In fact there is no rule itherwise.

You use them for pic changes so they are also unneeded.

(Scenic detail is a lot of fun to work with, especially when you get comfortable with using it often. I highly recommend incorporating a lot of scenic details into every story you write. )

That's actually not a very useful trait. It seems like it but really it isn't also that's a rewrite of a scene of your story which is forbidden in reviews.

(his sentence is a fragment and redundant)

Actually it's not fragmented or redundant. And Reeds rewrite just makes it come off as unneeded within the story.

(he second comma is unnecessary here: ‘”Oh, this is Nate, and Hugh!”)

Actually it is needed because you use ciommas when dealing with names and well the word and.

(
You don’t add a comma after hyphenated sections such as this.)

Actually your are supposed to. The example he gives is largely dismmised by predominant English professors.

(I’ve always seen this word spelled “Oi” as in “Oi! Get back here!” but it’s possible that it’s a regional variant spelling: “Oy”)

Actually there is no regional veration. That's from the Scots dielietc and it's spelled Oi.

(If it’s super effective, I’d describe how it has a more profound effect on the opponent, but otherwise, if it’s just a normally effective attack, there’s no need for a modifier that says that nothing out of place occurred here. For example, Water Gun only has a X1 effectiveness against a gabite, which is both water and dragon type. )

Ok one they way you did it fits with how everyone writes type effective attacks. Secondly you got to know something is up because this guy has no idea the type of a Pokemon. Fun fact, Reeds never played the games.

(tend to capitalize the word “pokemon,” which is a common mistake.)

Actually the word is official recognized in English as Capitalized. Been so for a decade.

(’s a franchise, so even writing programs like Microsoft Word and the pokemon website are going to capitalize them)

Actually most programs don't.

And it's also word of God conformed that in universe Pokemon and Pokemon names are capitalized.

(This sentence was a bit awkward to me: “’No problem.")

Actually there is no awkwardness given the story context. This guy most likely just wrote with no clue.

(Again, avoid mixing IRL stuff with a fictional universe separate from our own. )

Actually it's a fun call back to how Pokemon used to be. In fact most fictional universe present themselves as a veration of our own world.

(Bianca, don't you have a job from the Professor?’” Er, if Ash has just seen Bianca in what seems like a very long time, how does he know that she has an errand to run? I don’t believe that an errand was mentioned here before.)

I believe it's called giving us information when neeeded. As such there is no problem here.

(Also be careful of using the word “the” when referring to descriptions of things that haven’t been defined yet, )

Ok this is just bad advice.

(would end with something a little more vivid than “It was clear that the match was over.” )

That makes things sound genertic. It's better you do things your own way.

Now I don't think anything is needed to chamge. As it stands is a interesting premose. Your writing is spot on and you are using English in its actual method. I think its best to ignore reeds and block him as this guy tried to give out bad advice.