If Fleur Delacour dies by Voldemort's wand, Harry Potter should if he is man, and not a chicken, declare a blood feud against Voldemorts and his followers.

Mate, it’s the fact that you had Harry tortured by her at the drop of a hat, breaking so many dam laws she is suppose to up hold, and Harry just takes it like a dam submissive bitch... really hope you haven’t kept that path for long...

I hope you stop with this ridiculous thing about Harry passing out from exhaustion after using 1 or 2 spells...

Straight up Harry is getting exhausted way to quick, he does like one or two things and then his feels like his about to pass out? Some of the things his doing is basically just running for a cpl feet and then side stepping or a quick spin lol. That would not make him feel like his about to pass out, heck he would be doing a lot more strenuous activities just playing quidditch lol

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Really good chapter! Also, no problem abt the irregularities! I completely understand!

I love your story, although it is difficult to continue with such long periods between updates, my biggest problem apart from that is that I feel that you try to advance or add new things but then you stop abruptly, example, the judge with starting to fight so that understand that Voldemort is back, and when he receives the veritaserum he doesn't even allow questions about the cemetery events, I can understand that he doesn't want to answer others, for his safety thinking that Fudge is going to manipulate him to say that he helped the Profugo Sirius Black, then the subject of going too far with Fleur, just the day they become a couple, and forgive easily, I do not see it logical, finally Umbridge goes unpunished and makes Harry submissive, I hope that if you continue with this the death of Umbridge Be at least slow, painful, and descriptive, and not just Azkaban. For everything Harry suffers, I really hope this is rewarding. Anyway, the story continues, it is really good, but try to handle things better, because you advance on some fronts and then you make a wall that I see personally unnecessary, with continuing or working on the correction, in my opinion I would prefer that you finish the book first, for the long periods between updates.

Great start

Have you forgotten about the Veritaserum and Wizard's Oaths? Both of those could make all of this drama easily be solved.

Start working on chapter 13

Great chapter! Please keep Fleur’s magical power on par with Harry! Harry becoming all powerful is so cliche in a lot of a lot of stories on this site. Do show more lemons soon! Those are pretty good also.
Cheers!

Can't really believe it but you made harry an even bigger pushover than canon. This story doesn't make sense in that umbridge can just get away with her crimes like that. You "building it up" makes no sense if you make your main character a doormat in the process. You're trying to avoid making harry op too much in that you're actually making him more pathetic than normal. And what's up with making him blush in every act of intimacy. I'm a huge fan of harry/fleur but you ruined their relationship with how they both act. Grammar wise you're decent but some mistakes are apparent. The dialogue could use some improvement as it isn't realistic at times.

Hey not to been a complainer but what about an oath? As harry has already sworn 1 oath before in this story. So he could sworn an oath about his claim against Umbridge

when will you update it ?

In action about harassment towards Harry is not neutrality, especially when they chastise him when he defends himself.