| Reviews for A New Life |
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  Queen of Narnia chapter 8 . 5/28 I like you storyline! 30 children is A LOT. Feedback, your grammar isn’t very good. try using more punctuation! otherwise, love it! please update! |
 Entertainment lover chapter 8 . 5/12 Wonderful Chapter |
| Entertainment lover chapter 7 . 5/11 Nice chapt er. I hope Susan is alright |
| Entertainment lover chapter 6 . 5/11 Amazing chapter |
| chrmnadlwn chapter 8 . 5/10 thank you for the update. Happy Mother's Day to your mum! Please don't ever stop updating this love this |
| sophie chapter 1 . 4/27 ok |
| genbo chapter 7 . 4/12 Your fellow was wonderfully written, but now all the questions at the end have left me wanting to read more. I hope you update again soon! Stay safe & have a Happy Easter! |
| NinjaDevil2000 chapter 6 . 1/27 Omg this was so amazing I’m crying oh my god. This was so good! Ugh the final battle!? Amazing! I’ve never read anything like this fic before and it’s so good. Well done |
| mae-E chapter 5 . 1/10 an interesting chapter. with the thers back at the castle i hope that they can by some miracle swoop in and help save the day before she gets killed! |
| NinjaDevil2000 chapter 5 . 12/25/2019 Awesome chapter :) I can't wait to read more. I'd love some Edmund vs Witch content but I'm happy with whatever |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2019 I like the concept of this fanfic, it’s really fun! If I had to say anything though, it would be the number of children Susan had. 28 is a lot! I think that if you wish to include a big family, 7 to 9 children is a more realistic choice. |
| Yong Soo Kim chapter 4 . 5/30/2019 just next ! I can't wait... |
| Yong Soo Kim chapter 1 . 5/30/2019 I think the flow is rather speedy, maybe because it's a prologue, but for everything that's good, I like your story3 |
| Entertainment lover chapter 4 . 5/27/2019 Fantastic chapter . I am glad Caspian told Pevensie about their sister and nieces& nephews |
| NinjaDevil2000 chapter 4 . 5/27/2019 Oh this is brilliant I cannot wait for more. I'll have you know, that last night at three am, my inbox was flooded with emails and story alerts but it's totally worth it. I love it so much and cannot wait for more. Please more Edmund. He's my favorite and if he's going to fight the white witch, well, he needs more screen time. That is just my opinion though. I think you're writing it extremely well already. |
