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amazing!

OMG Keep it up! So goooooooooood

OMG I'm crying! This chapter was so good! Best ending! I can't wait for the sequel to come out! I'm sure it will be great!
And now I want to draw something from this awesome fanfic!

i love this story! but you really the rutile twins instead of just rutile

I like how a little of the old Lars sneaked through because frankly...he's right to be pessimistic. Even the CREATORS of the show make insinuation about White bein unreachable!

Everyone on the home front on earth working to protect the planet! I can’t wait to see what they do! Keep up the awesome work!

Wow that's a lot it was really good I love how your making the characters hope is a good thing rebellions are built on hope but I loved this chapter and I can't wait for another one so please update as soon as you possibly can thanks
All ur fave

Aww, poor sad Lars and his crew. I never really thought the reveal would have such a big impact on them. But you did well

Buck!
Seeing Lars reunited with Ronaldo being Ronaldo and the cool kids, that was really great! And that reveal too

I read the last guest review - and I want to thank the person for noting that! I try using ellipsis to make it seem less forced, but sometimes I can exaggerate xD
I may be insecure, but I welcome constructive criticism! As long as you're not rude while doing so, of course.
(Gee, I kinda wish Fanfiction allowed people to reply to anonymous comments, it would help me a lot)

My only criticism... is that you use ellipses... a little too much. The writing is fine but the egregious use of pauses takes you out of the story once you notice it

where are lapis and peridot at

This chapter was great! Seeing the reprecussions of the Pink Diamond reveal from a new viewpoint is awesome! Keep up the awesome work!

Shouldn't Lars be with his parents?