nice explaination on the modifications

Looking good! Only saw 3 typos, warrior, not worrier, pretty sure Zoro ment later there at the end, and I don't think there's any reason to capitalize sake if it isn't at the beginning of the sentence.

raging Sanji

This chapter made me grin, only one typo spotted, Reiju's name seems to have been hit by autocorrect.

One or two small typos, hole instead of whole, and you might want to give Cosette's sentence at the end here a little touch up.
Typos aside, very sweet chapter! I like the simple but strong display of how much Nami trusts Sanji.

ooh kababs

haha chocolate obsession

A few small typos, misspelled liar and fair. Now I'm going to go squeal over the fluff.

Great interaction! I loved it!

One typo spotted, you spelled following with an "a". And yeah, I bet it's hard to keep track of that many! Maybe if you write out a list?

Little typo, you had Sora say that she doesn't have a favorite chile, pretty sure you ment child. I liked how Chopper immediately had Ichiji drugged.

A kingdom near the ruins of Flevance? And wherever that is...it sure as hell spooked Law! I gotta wonder what's up.

Or they could put him on the sub.

I always thought Roland to be a good name for a king. Thanks for the Law bit! And you weren't the only one who watched that episode twice. I did as well, if only, for the geeking out of Law! That boy's such a dork! Doctor Dork, hee!

Just reread this whole thing, really glad there was another two chapters added since I started, it's so good! One thing that could use some work, there's a lot of typos that look like autocorrect chose the wrong word, like saying 'waist' instead of 'waste'.