beutiful story master fully writting %1000

Interesting crossover between two different mediums, at first I had no idea what you could even do, but it turned out super creative. I hope eventually Deku will get all the skills in his operator tree, as well as all the way bound stuff. Im also guessing a partnership with Umbra in the future, also idk how they will qork through the legal stuff.

I Hope you continue your work.

We want more Fumi-kun interaction! I love my bird-boi!

kept you waiting, huh?

Straight fire, can't wait to see the next chapter!

I prefer Madurai for the increased damage butthose 2 definitely suit izuku

Im actually waiting to really branch out until i have more waybounds unlocked. The vazarin are most important tho because i don’t want my operator to die as soon as i use him. Once i have enough i want to start using umbra again and focus on using my operator(honestly the biggest reason is that i like to use characters i create)

Is that omake a reference to the fact that mot vor generally goes down quick and then keeps talking for like 2 more minutes?

Its interesting that a lot of people i know wanna do conclave but they rarely do(tho one plays it regularly(i think he said he wanted the syandana))

Great story from what I’ve read so far!

Ive been thinking about how well a tenno in bnha would work for a while but didnt really expect there to be a fic like that so let me just say that I’m pleasantly surprised

Also i was thinking about how nomu and warframes are a similar concept in a way(mindless living weapons except umbra and even his mind doesnt seem that complex) so i was a wondering if a tenno might be able to use transference on them

Well idk i need sleep so i’ll see if you do something like that when i wake up

Oh man, this is fantastic. I saw this recommended on Spacebattles, and one guy complained about it being cemented to the rails of canon, yet this is anything but. I feel like that guy didn't make it past the first few chapters, because now, shit's gettin L.

My only, ONLY gripe, would be with the ship. I just don't see the chemistry personally, and it feels just a tad bit forced from the get go. However, that is all I have in terms of negativity. I love this story.

I sincerely hope you're doing well, since COVID is kind of kicking everyone's ass right now. Stay safe!

Dear god...
this was a Fic I've been dying to know of its existence. And I'm finally glad that I've found it. I don't usually stick around with fics correlating to Warframe, regardless if it is my top favoured game. But the way it was incorporated with the world of MHA was almost flawless, beautiful even, with each and every chapter I've read giving me the sense of "What's going to happen next?", not once did i have that feeling. My personal gripe was the heavy usage of the traditional terms for any clothing and items. It would have been great if you at least gave a detailed yet brief description of the item before revealing its name for people unaware of say a roningasa, or even the name of the amp parts, so I won't have to always search up the actual image. Though personally, I don't mind at all.

Not to mention of how the story of the original MHA still follows, but still given enough originality to make off set with the OG, such the simplest of change of having Izuku's close friends being Tokoyami and Tsuyu rather the Uraraka and Iida, or to obvious changes like Izuku going to a Hero such as Backdraft for work experience, then subtle changes such as the deaths of certain characters, Umbra's portrayal, Naomasa and the other Heroes trailing him, and my most favourite and unexpected addition was the introduction of the Eidolon in the world, a Hydrolyst no less, especially how you've taken to account of the Eidolon now roaming a free ocean rather than a confined plains, thus having the addition of the Eidolon now covered in an assortment of debris and wrecks, especially seeing it lost its main left cannon, being replaced with a submarine and its synovia being completely covered up. Then another favourite change being the interruption of the Man In The Wall in the sports festival, you really did amazingly in the portrayal of *his* nature.

Then there's Eri and Rell's portion of the story, another aspect i never expected by highly intrigued with what it could bring up, especially seeing Overhaul in a state before the plague doctor masks. I'm really growing attached with the portrayal of two children, riding on the same boat with different reasons, slowly, but surely forging a bond, a good contrast to set away from the isolated original of Eri. Really curious of what you in store.

Overall, You've gotten me hooked beyond any story, and I can't wait to see what you've got in store, I might be inclined to doing some form of fanart for this. Hope you're doing well and stay safe, Tenno.

Running in the 90's? nah. how about GAUSS GAUSS GAUSS!

"The Meme Gods of Warframe had awoken."

then were the heck is Salad V?

So, I have good things and bad things to say here. The good is that it can easily fit into the top 20 MHA fics, placing above ones like Torchbearer, any popular villain!Deku story, or any other fic that just throws a power from another series at Deku without changing much else. If I had to summarize my praise for this series, I would say you have a lot of great ideas that work (Eri with Rell, the slow-burn Umbra plot, the limits of Deku's Void powers, the portrayal of the Man in the Wall) and you definitely have the skills to put it on paper.

Unfortunately, there are some issues that keep it from being ranked higher, so I'll try to list what I've noticed and what kind of metaphorical band-aids you can put on the issues.

The largest issue is that I think you're trying to do too much. There's a lot of attention on a romantic subplot that doesn't necessarily fit, more interactions with characters that seem like it might lead to some development but never does, extended training scenes that only interrupt the flow of the story, and a number of memes and references that only take away from the scene you've set. The closest fic I can think of that tries the same thing and succeeds is The Dark Below, which can be best described as an eldritch geopolitical thriller set in the MHA universe. It featured both a romantic subplot (not even for Izuku, mind you) and a number of side characters that never really went anywhere. About halfway through the story, the author admits as much, as deals with it in ch46, which is about as much as I can say without spoiling it. For training scenes, outside of an early one, TDB rarely goes into detail on the training itself and either keeps it off screen or sticks with make it more surreal than a literal training regimen (more like Izuku's void training than his physical one, in your case). Finally, for references, TDB almost never uses them directly or just keeps it small enough that it's "blink and you'll miss it" (kind of like your aurora joke this chapter, which was really well done). Basically, TDB sticks very closely to the "show don't tell" rule. It never once mentions that the kids Tokoyami has adopted are all Naruto jinchurikis, instead describing them as variety of orphaned kids with mutation based quirks that lack the ability to control them. There would be no way to make any connection if it hadn't mentioned one being a tanuki and another a kitsune, or that they came from remote, hidden villages. Hell, the author even changed the entire setting for a chapter to a level from Bloodborne, and I only caught on in the end because they mentioned it was a clocktower. So, more that and less "like that guy from Jojo" or "Rikido smash".

Another issue is in relation to what game mechanics should be included and what story elements should be considered from a constantly evolving game. For mechanics, the rule is always to keep it simple and surface level. Abilities like Void Dash or Void Blast translate well into a story, because you never actually need to say the ability name. They can be reduced to "manipulating the void energies" and you've done that well. The further and more game-like you get however, the less it fits a story's format. Things that only make sense in the game in the context of it being a game, like a focus tree or amp construction, should be kept vague at best and anything customization related should be left out (if this fic had started out with Izuku gaining a variety of different equippable Warframes or he started talking about which Arcane he wanted to equip, I would have dropped it faster than a villain!Deku fic). Long story short, if it is unnecessary to the central plot and makes you "tell" with no way to "show", it's a bad idea. Leveling up Vazarin can be reduced to "focusing on bending the energies to shield others" and you can reduce amps to something like "similar to a shotgun in design" instead of its actual name. There is no way to include Deku equipping Magus Vigor and having it sound natural. This leads a little bit into my next point on game story elements: If the average reader has to Google it, it's not something you should include without proper setup. Warframe as a setting doesn't make this any easier, as a good portion of the actual story is hidden away in time-limited events that can only be found in wiki descriptions if you weren't there for the event itself. It's similar with cosmetics. If you want Deku to wear traditional Tenno attire, go ahead. Style issues are something else. But don't start using traditional names that only make sense to someone versed in every minor detail or lucky enough to have picked the same style of cosmetics. I had to look up what a "gasa" was, when you could have just said "wide-brimmed hat with metal nodes" and I would have gotten the image perfectly fine. Once again, "show, don't tell".

The last real criticism I have can't really be fixed at this point, and it's related to focus. A good example of a fic that has near perfect focus is His Father's Son, which is all about demons, angels, and the like in the MHA world. Everything that happens in it is either introduced as it is related to the religious themes or was already going to happen. Izuku's friend group sticks with Tenya and Ochako, because Izuku is following a similar enough path that it has no reason to change. Tokoyami is added to the group only because he has a literal demon for a quirk. Ibara is an antagonist because she's excessively religious. If it's a main event that isn't related, either skip it or make it related. The League of Villains is now a doomsday cult. The Hero Killer is now the Heretic Killer. The Sports Festival turns from what it was in canon to Izuku wrestling with his inner demon as another accuses him of being one. The setting was the same, but the characterization made it completely different. And, this is going to sound harsh, but your Sports Festival felt like canon's with a $5 skin slapped on-top of it (at least up until Man in the Wall interfered). It was just tenno!Deku doing things with a slightly rotated cast. Like, Tokoyami x Ibara is a thing now, and I can't fathom why you decided to include that, outside of "let's give Tokoyami a love interest and it doesn't matter who". It'd be like giving Umbra a love interest, it wouldn't fit. Similarly, shipping Izuku with Tsuyu. I like the ship on its own, but it has no reason to be in this story. There aren't any differences from canon that justify it being related to this story. It just felt like you went "alright, let's just give all of Ochako's roles to Tsuyu because I like her design better". I'll grant you that there aren't many characters that can fit in a Warframe plot (Eri, Thirteen, Edgeshot, maybe Ojiro or Tooru if we stretch it a little), but I would take less, focused content over something long and generic.

Just to wrap everything up, I still really like this fic. It has enough originality that it easily is the best "Izuku gets a power from another franchise", but there's enough that sticks out that I want it to get better.