Hi! May I ask if where I can read the light novel of Mondaiji..?

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I ship Izayoi x Kuro Usagi. And i love they too

I was not going to read this originally, as I have stopped reading fanfiction altogether, but my friend gave me the link to your story and through her reaction, I decided to also take a look.

It took a little bit for me to get used to the bit of awkward sentences in the beginning, but as I read more, that stopped being a problem, especially with how things began to pick up.

I was pleasantly surprised by how the story turned towards when Izayoi pulled on the young Kuro Usagi's ears. When she looked at everyone with those cold eyes, there was a sense of the pleasure that comes from seeing retribution. It was good. Going from there, how Kuro Usagi talked to Leticia, her subsequent apology, to confusion with Lily, and finally the rapid mood change from Asuka's slap that caused Kuro Usagi to run away, it all lead to a very enjoyable read.

The next part was even better for me. First, the way Izayoi handled Kuro Usagi was a bit too literal, but it also stayed true to how he might have really acted. Truthfully, the moment you had Kuro Usagi mention Canaria, I was wondering just what Izayoi was going to do when he finally found Kuro Usagi. Overall, I liked that it wasn't too serious of a scene in terms of mood. It felt just right for someone reconciliation with a little child. Sometimes, all one really needs is a heartfelt talk, and this delivered. Something different than what I wrote in my oneshot about a child Izayoi.

Of course, when Shiroyasha then said Kuro Usagi would probably revert the next day, I thought Izayoi might take her to Underwood, and I was slightly disappointed when that didn't happen. However, I suppose having Kuro Usagi remember what happened, and the promise by proxy, was a good second.

W-what is this feeling of inadequacy and jealousy in my heart? I feel as if I got one uped and then some and lost the battle.

This was amazing good. The large chunk of text was difficult to read though but I liked how you portrayed the characters. Gods its good, beyond what I was expecting. And to be honest I'm sad someone beat me to the punch with this. Gah! The result of my laziness!

This is a lengthy piece but an especially well written one. The interaction between Loli Usagi and Izayoi especially had me feeling a tad jealous that you could portray them so close to their canon counterparts so easily. That was wuthout a doubt the highlight of the fic. I especialy like how Izayoi srruggled a bit yet still had an idea of what to say based on his own experiences. His feelings of guilt towards robbing Kuro Usagi of the promise she hade with Canaria, that actually got me to wonder if Canaria did those things with Izayoi to also make up for the promise she couldn't keep. Even so this one fic made me accept Kuro Usagi going with Izayoi and Gry a bit more since that felt a bit off for me when reading it.

My only concern is Asuka slapping Loli Usagi given she knows the circumstances it did feel a bit forced yet at the same time if Asuka didn't underdtand it it would be in her character to go a bit overvoard like that. Asuka's goal in Little Garden is to understand people but at the same time the placement of the fic on the mondaiji time line is weird for her to do that.

A couple missed typos here and there but otherwise wonderfully done!

Hoh? It's interesting...

Although there are some typos here and there, it's rather new and fresh experience.

The trio never really know how to dealt with kids so their confusion was understandable and expecially Izayoi. He may lives in an orphanage with many other kids but his interaction with them is still awkward at best so his confusion, reaction and forgetting to adjust his usual behavior and causing pain to Kuro Usagi in both physical and mental emphasize the fact that even if he holds great power and responsibility, at the end of the day he is still young and somewhat immature. It was a good great and I really like the ending.