Reviews for Pining
Shiranai Atsune chapter 10 . 2/21/2019
This is so beautiful and hot. You sure know how to write good lemons!

This is one of the few fics that makes me content with the length just the way they are.

...btw, what happened to Lance here in the end?
Shiranai Atsune chapter 5 . 2/21/2019
...I feel really bad for Lance here. Keith is the one who dumped him, remember, then almost immediately he goes for Acxa?
Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 2/21/2019
Ooohhh. I smell lemon coming soon!

...I still can't help but think how bad I feel for Lance. Poor guy must be so heartbroken, I hope this doesn't make him quit the team...
Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 2/21/2019
Awwww... I do like this fic but I feel bad for Lance...
eggpufan chapter 5 . 12/28/2018
;3
Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2018
So.. their horny for each other?
fluffyfirefly chapter 10 . 11/8/2018
So glad I found this story, it's just so damn good. I love the way you portrayed Keith and Acxas relationship, they're the cutest and most adorable thing ever.

Thanks for this beautiful story, love it.
Shiranai Atsune chapter 10 . 9/30/2018
Awww! This was so cute and heartwarming to read!
Guest Guy chapter 2 . 8/13/2018
Almost tuned out at that klance shit in the first chapter. Why is it that the delusional minds of every fangirl believes that to be a thing despite Lance actively perusing beautiful women?
KennethGrey chapter 7 . 8/4/2018
Ahaaaaaaaaaaa chapter 8 plis kajska
PD: I really love it
Madame Atomic Bomb chapter 6 . 8/4/2018
Love it, all of it. So, so, so good.
Madame Atomic Bomb chapter 5 . 8/4/2018
Oh, Jello us Lance rears his ugly head. :)
Madame Atomic Bomb chapter 4 . 8/4/2018
I love how protective she is of him. :)
Madame Atomic Bomb chapter 3 . 8/4/2018
So freaking sexy! Love your smut.
Madame Atomic Bomb chapter 2 . 8/4/2018
I'm rereading it...SO GOOD!
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