Reviews for Unvirtuous Treaty
Beast of Prey chapter 14 . 7/18
Hey, I just wanted to write and say I'm enjoying the story so far and I'm grateful that you wrote an enjoyable story with this pairing. I hope you finish this story! And I like the concept that 9S went out of his way to study human intercourse and taught it to 2B.
0erbayunFang chapter 14 . 7/8
Holy moly. Okay, so I'm a fan of your writing (I can't remember if I left a review on a story of yours from the XIII archive), big time. I really hope you have some more planned, because oh my god. I'm in love with this. Can I pick your brain sometime for ideas?
Luine Mercury LWG chapter 14 . 7/3
I'm sure that the current Nines is feeling a lot of things by this point in his trip through 2B's memories of their time together.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Rain on Sunday chapter 14 . 6/21
This. Is. Beautiful!

Honestly, this story is everything that I have ever wanted in a 9S and 2B fic. The tension, the emotion, the constant push and pull of these two during their endless cycle, it's all so perfectly executed. Each chapter is full of this feeling of dread and hope, hope that they will get closer to each other, and the inevitable order that we know will come. I've been in tears more than once, and then I've been smiling at my phone like a fool during their cuter moments, and I am yearning for more!

I particularly love how you interweave little moments and quirks into their narrative, and how you do us on their never ending cycle. We all know the horrible cycle they are in, the one they had no control over from the start, but then you interlay their story with another cycle - a better one - where they grow closer and the little quirks and gifts carriers over to 9S's next life. It's so well done it leaves a constant ache in my chest whenever bits and pieces of 9S's past life reveals itself to 2B.

Also, the latest chapter was steamy, but so innocent and full of unadulterated love. I adore the way you portray these two idiots! Gawdddd I just want more!

Anyway, excuse my rambling, but I am wholeheartedly excited for the next chapter and how this story will pan out! You have such a gift for writing and I just want to thank you as well for sharing this absolute gem of a fic! I look forward to reading more!
Ultimate blazer chapter 14 . 6/15
Beautiful chapter indeed. The ending was a bad surpirse but well, good things must have an end.

Thanks!
Profilore chapter 13 . 5/20
Aaaand she remembers it because 9s upploaded her before they died. Of course.
Shit, i can smell the devastation
Also wow that's unexpectedly hot
Ultimate blazer chapter 12 . 5/8
Well, that escalated very quickly indeed.

Thanks for the chapter!
Profilore chapter 12 . 5/8
Ohhhh
I see
Shit
That puts prolog into perspective
Kale Salad chapter 11 . 4/28
Very happy to see this back, it’s so good. Hope to see more soon.
Profilore chapter 11 . 4/27
Ouch 2B
I see where this is going... Just ouch
Pokerandom chapter 11 . 4/27
Beautiful chapter indeed.
papapapuffy chapter 11 . 4/27
I can only hope her happiness lasts a decent amount of time. I really loved how she responded to him.
Update soon.
NoNameAvailable Bis chapter 10 . 4/20
Ohoh, it's back! Congratulations for the addition to the family!

Anyway, never before a mackerel ending been so tragic. Nothing much to say about the chapter, I think - the steps might be different, but the dance is familiar between 2B and 9S by now. But hey, at least 9S didn't botch his suicide attempt this time! Progress...? Yeeah, didn't think so either.

Nonetheless, thank you for the update, and hopefully see you soon!
papapapuffy chapter 10 . 4/16
According to the dialogue in Sound of the End orchestra concert. Pod 153 states: "It is their 48th contact." My point being is I hope you make 48 of these heartbreaking chapters ;]
Update soon.
papapapuffy chapter 9 . 2/7
Destroy my heart over and over again. I'm willing. Please update soon.
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