Reviews for Naruto - The Gamer |
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Addlcove chapter 10 . 7/25 this needs continuing :) |
kade435 chapter 11 . 7/5 Well até least It didn't end with a huge cliffhanger but I am a little disappointed that you won't continue this story... If in the future you gain the drive again, I hope you write this story to its True completion... Anyways it was a good story, peace out |
Kuro.435 chapter 10 . 7/4 Very interesting thoughts |
Kuro.435 chapter 9 . 7/4 Great chapter |
Kuro.435 chapter 8 . 7/4 Although it can be considered a filler chapter, I enjoyed it very much specially the kids interactions |
Kuro.435 chapter 7 . 7/4 Spear for a specialized Assassin in training? Assassins need short but deadly weapons since they work in the dark and narrow places to never be seen so a spear defeats the assassins’ purpose... aside from that great chapter |
Kuro.435 chapter 6 . 7/4 Might Gut is also one of my fav characters since all he had was through hard work |
Kuro.435 chapter 5 . 7/4 Kyuubi seven in the grass was hilarious XD good work |
Kuro.435 chapter 4 . 7/4 Well Kyuubi was nice considering... |
Kuro.435 chapter 2 . 7/3 Awesome chapter, loved the council scene, it was cute and surprising, I love this Hiruzen much more |
Kuro.435 chapter 1 . 7/3 I liked the 1st chapter, especially the quickness of the system it was well done and with an explanation whynot just because the author wrote it), sometimes there is a need to give explanations to make it more interesting. Naruto with red-hair is very funny |
Eragon135790 chapter 11 . 5/8 sad that the story has ended end there will be no new chapters. |
Eragon135790 chapter 6 . 5/8 this explanation for where the wood-block comes from is jenius. |
chitiiiii chapter 3 . 4/24 First of all, why is it when he learns the skills, the skills are already maxed out? I would understand if the book had EVERYTHING you need about example subject here, but even I would know not to give such a high-ranking book to a child, who can be easily molded into however anyone likes, and someone you could easily influence, as is the wariness and cautiousness of a ninja. I understand that Naruto had become more mature, in other people's eyes, but he is still a child. So I very much do not get it. But I know that this book is just for criticism so, tee hee |
brandonkesseh1 chapter 1 . 1/18 I wanted to know if you can do the same trhing your doing now but with your own OC(male) what i mean is instead of puttung him in the body of already existing character from naruto have him still be born an uzumaki but like naruto's cousin |