wish the author would pick this story back up

you're muscle - your muscle

Nice

This is a good story

Please update

How stupid you need to be to try something like that with mentally damaged alpha bitch who can't stand your shadow let alone self, and hope for it to not backfire horribly? Ah, plot armor, right. It's so nice when hero is on the know about it. For the hero, who is knowingly playing the god mode.

Is there any reason at all to continue further?..

God damn taylor is a bit of a badass

This what I've been waiting sophia getting embarrassed

Wonderful. Nothing like a touch of artistic madness, especially the kind which deprives others of free will, to lighten up a dull evening.

Please keep going

Oof. And there's no real way for this Taylor to get some sort of sanity restoring power; Outside of trying to go for an 'anti-ziz bomb' thing, and even then... it'd require thinking that the current mind whammy set isn't up to the task.

Thanks for the chapter _.

I knew it! Rorschach is Batman.

Short chapter but it was good overall I'm curious to see what powers he has considering he decided to be Rorschach.

Disregard the idiot with no reading comprehension. The whole 'in the middle' start is nice for a change. And the weird obsession these two have for each other make this weirdly alluring. So, out of morbid curiosity and eagerness, i ask you to keep going.