Awww such a cool chapter and way to integrate Jouichirous travel as a reason for finding Asahi!

Amazing!

Wow great chapter as usual! btw, im rlly liking the dialogue cuz it kinda helps create an image of whats happening which is cool. Btw, I'm rlly liking how you made Asahi into kind of a vengeful person instead of just a person who joined Noir and wanted to marry Erina to take over the culinary world. I feel like it gives more drive to him.

Thank you for updating! I really like your Asahi.
I felt that the manga Asahi was like you said a just another problem. A hollow character.
But your Asahi will be like it should be done in the manga. Thank you for that! And Gin taking care of Soma like a godfather, i love it. I'll be waiting for more!

You know I've seen a few fics where they make Jouichirou's hair red and I'm here thinking "why? His hair is brown or whatever NOT RED, WHY MAKE IT RED" idk it just kinda irks me but anyways good chapter

Hey this is way better development than the manga.
It was honestly great to see Dojima and Jouichiro have a vulnerable friend-to-friend talk.
This fanfic is going in a good direction. Now just don't bring the chainsaw dude. That shit was ridiculous!
And take care of yourself man, sleep deprivation really damages your body, nowadays i just tire myself to sleep

Thank you for updating! So now Erina knows to watch out for an anonymous Saiba. I really enjoy your interactions between Soma and Erina, so thank you for that. I'll be waiting for more!

Next please

BRUH! when I saw this updated I WAS WAHHHHHHHHHH! And awww TwT this ch was adorable! I agree that when you're not satisfied with the sketch, it's always fine to restart and refresh and no one needs to rush uwu Having Erina change in his room was a trope I'm glad you didnt do cuz she NOT GONNA RISK IT YOU KNOW WHAT IM SAYIN HAHAH Yessss turn Soma into this flustered mess so he can have a taste of his own medicine he's such a natural charmer tho haha, and flirty Erina is always (u-u)b She be worried to be his gurl when she's already acting like one haha «33 LOVE your take on the banter between them AND OOOOO IF YOU EVER DO MAKE A SEQUEL I'LL BE FLIPPIN OUT 24/7 HUEHUEHUE! HOPE YOU'RE NOT FEELING PRESSURED TO RELEASE REGULARLY «33 Take your time and take care!

I saw the notification for chapter 18 and I immediately read it. This is my favorite story of sorina! Keep up the great work!

Ngl your fic got me cryin whenever soma thinks about his mom lmao

Dafuq!? Another one so fast, you my man... or woman are one of a kind, great story so far

YeeEeEEEeTtt ‹3‹3‹3 I'm glad you did a sick Soma, most fics tend to have Erina as the patient then he takes care of her, BUT HORAYYY TO MORE SICK SOMA SINCE HE'S TOO CRAZY AND CARELESS NOT TO GET SICK GAHDDAMNIT! IN CANON THEY HAVE SUCH A HIGH SEXUAL TENSION TO IGNORE SO YASS!Anyway that Mana snippit is just GAHH- Also I think it's very nice you changed it to T since it is more story driven, tho im not gonna complain if it goes back to Mʖhuehuehuehue jk AND PLEASE CONTINUE BEING SAFE AND AWESOME :DD «33

Thank you for updating! I'll be waiting for more!

next please I was so in the end and now I can't wait for the next