Reviews for Jaded
Okami Pup chapter 5 . 9/24/2018
It is amazing
Jedi Paladin AJ Ray chapter 5 . 9/21/2018
I wonder if you like WWE as well since you mentioned 3 out of the 4 womens title belts before they gave Raw and Smackdown their own womens title belts. Also the current champions for them after Hell In A Cell for Raw Womens Title: Ronda Rousey and Smackdown Womens Title: Becky Lynch respectivly. One was a rematch that ended in Tap Out while the one was pinfall making her a 2 time champion. I hope you found this helpful since you and Invader Johnny and Yonz make reading Jori ships fun.
Jedi Paladin AJ Ray chapter 4 . 9/21/2018
I just came up with a nickname 4 that pervy neighbor after reading the threat about his 8 inch pecker. Big Dick Johnson. there said it.
ScottyBgood chapter 5 . 9/20/2018
Nice bit of interactions. Yea, Tori is majorly involved in watching Jade's schedule, and it raises the question, what is Jade doing every Tuesday? Also, nice to have Trina being friendly with Andre. So, who romances who, knowing we're gonna get us some Jori.
ScottyBgood chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
Boding continues between Trina and Jade, including the goths protectiveness, cause she didn't have to run over and try to help Trina. Gonna be an interesting ride.
Game-Watch chapter 5 . 9/20/2018
Never really thought of Trina/Andre but hey, if Andre can handle his grandmother, he can definitely handle Trina.

Eh it's alright. Good gameplay features but the story kind of plays it safe.
Lushcoltrane chapter 5 . 9/20/2018
Good interaction here. It'll be great if Trina & Jade are friends (or at least civil) when Jade & Tori get together. Trina & Andre? Haven't really considered them as a couple but it could work. Andre would need a lot of woman to keep him from wandering & his experience with his grandmother would help in dealing with Trina's needs.
Lushcoltrane chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
Good installment. Like the way the girls are growing closer. The short, embarrassing (to Andre) chat was fun too.
Invader Johnny chapter 5 . 9/20/2018
Heh if Tori takes into account Jade's routine, I do wonder what else she has noticed about her sister's roommate? Umm.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Boris Yeltsin chapter 5 . 9/20/2018
Not bad. Update when you can.
Invader Johnny chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
Now that Trina knows about the situation between Jade and ger step mom, I do wonder if she would be able to help out favorite West.

And safe to say that yes, if Jade could find a find to kill someone with toilet paper then the perv neighbor sure took Jade's threat into serious consideration to say the least, heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
ScottyBgood chapter 3 . 8/25/2018
Jade's stepmom is a piece of work, pushing to get Jade to walk away from her inheritance. Not thew right way to do things. However, while she is a bitch, I doubt she has the leverage she thinks she has. given the relationship jade seems to have with her father, I think maybe he won't care so much. Jade won't know that, but she also won't give in to the blackmail. Gonna be drama.

How long before Trina starts playing matchmaker? The world may not care, but I do. Lets see where this relationship slash Tori's interests in boobs takes us.
Invader Johnny chapter 3 . 8/25/2018
I agree with Trina, Jade's stepmom is a total bitch but I know Jade, she's not about to give that woman any satisfaction, so when the week us over, the battle will begin.

My favorite part however was when Trina started getting on Tori's case about her sexuality, Tori is so in denial about liking girls that she needed her older sister spelling things out for her, heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Jori4Rilaya chapter 3 . 8/25/2018
So far I see improvement in the building friendship between the girls and what Trina said about Jade's step mom- Ha! Then there was the fact that Trina was grilling Tori about her sexuality about maybe liking girls, maybe even a certain goth girl Yay! Does Trina know something about Tori that we don't know of? I guess will wait and see.
Lushcoltrane chapter 3 . 8/25/2018
I like the idea of Jade & Trina together for a change. But I'm guessing they'll become friends more than lovers. Or at least allies against the wicked stepmother. (No idea yet who the evil ones are based on.)
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