I’m just going to say the only issue is that Kagome’s eyes are not brown, they’re blue. That is like one of the big differences between her and Kikyo.

This was interesting

La volviste a leer después de un tiempo.
Me gusto bastante.
Inu es tonto. Ellos lo querían como familia y el a ellos. Si solo hubiera madurado en esos 500 años. Podría haber tenido a kagome como amiga y a su familia. Y quizás con el tiempo a su hermano pero tubo que cagar a como siempre.

i cant wait for the conclusion great story!

I enjoyed it definitely a unique twist

just to let you know you call Kirara a two tail demon fox here

So, usual sesskag about how sesshoumaru is so good and kagome is so powerful. Funny how inuyasha is always the worst person with no redeeming features. Kinda lazy to make antagonist just because you hate the character.

how does someone go from heartbroken to literally imagining licking someone else in like a few paragraphs

this whole story was brilliant. can't wait to read the sequel.

Good story so far. The only think that I noticed a few times is you are calling Kirara a fox, she is a cat. Can't wait to read the rest!

Love it. Kagome got the right idea in the end!

Uhm...she doesn't want to move too fast with him? LMAO...she has sex with him the first time she sees him in this time, after having no previous relationship with him, AND she essentially married him by mating him & getting marked. It's a bit too late for 'not wanting to move too fast'. Lol.

HI,LOVE YOUR FANFIC,,,,,,,,CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE,,,,,,LOOKING FORWARD TO THE SEQUAL...TDAN

I really like your story so far, but the oni and onni you put before the taiji are not needed. If you do want to say something girl it’s On'nanoko, for woman it’s On'na. Just a helpful hit you can use it or not it’s your story. Happy writing...

for a second I thought that it was Sesshomaru that said he was wed. I was so terrified!