Reviews for The Guardian of The Gates
Wolf03Cub1982 chapter 21 . 9/21
Please don’t end this story it’s amazing and deserves to be read by the world
TheLochNessy chapter 21 . 9/6
Okay this story is absolutely amazing please dont give up on it I really hope to read more
AGreen2222 chapter 1 . 8/28
I love this story! I hope it’s not discontinued. I love how you write Lucy and Laxus.
Tilty.bbb chapter 21 . 4/4
This was fantastic well done
KEZZ 1 chapter 21 . 12/11/2019
Wonderful story so far
I am looking forward to reading more soon please
Stavroula99 chapter 17 . 11/10/2019
I finished the story yesterday but death these two chapters again. I wanted to say that I kind of get why Lucy wants to run away. BUT. Aren't they mated now? Doesn't Laxus know this? I mean he was drunk yes but can't he feel her emotions now? Isn't the mating pilling him to Lucy now that she's away? And I find it kind of unreasonable that she left. She could've stayed and discussed it with him in the morning. I'm so frustrated that they are not together after this that I had to come and comment again :p
Stavroula99 chapter 21 . 11/10/2019
The story is great so far. There's been a lot of time since I read a good Lalu fanfic. I like their bomd, the way they talk and communicate. However I feel a bit lost after the chapter that Lucy left Laxus. I hope that we get to see some action between each other and that this misunderstanding will be solved soon. Please update as soon as you can. I'm dying to find out what happens in the next chapter
aliciacevbra chapter 21 . 11/4/2019
Poor Laxus must be desperate.
Ettie4Happie chapter 21 . 10/18/2019
Well shit... o.o Poor Laxus... Are we gunna get a POV from him soon? Is he sick from biting Licy but not finishing the mating? I need to know!
Takumi Scarlet chapter 21 . 10/16/2019
Love it! Plz update soon
LunaStarLady chapter 21 . 10/15/2019
Oh no. I really hope ahe finds out what she needs to find out.
Tiernank chapter 21 . 10/15/2019
Wowzers! What a can of worms! I can’t wait to hear what Draco has to say about the Heartfellia family history! You totally made my morning with this update. I adore this fic! Xoxo
jophiel022 chapter 20 . 9/26/2019
Please update! I want to know what happens next!
rere97maui chapter 20 . 6/27/2019
Just finished reading what you have up so far and I'm lovin it. Your update for 'To Set The Caged Bird Free' was so good (I really enjoy your writing and story development) that I wanted to read more of your stuff and I found this little gem, I couldn't put it down! So now I'm patiently (read impatiently) waiting for all of your stories to update, lol. I love all of your stories and can't wait to see how each one develops. Keep up the awesome writing. :)
LovelyLovelyLove chapter 20 . 6/5/2019
Well I'm hooked on this now! Lovely story so far
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