Loved that last exchange.

Aw, this is nice.

Not sure how I feel about this Davis. I get he's younger but it still doesn't really feel like him.
Interesting but I'm not sure I like how you've painted the two characters. Feels a little OOC

I look forward to a contiuation

It's disgusting because you turned Davis into a week character and make Kari a brave hero, but this is already OOC. Kari was physically weak and mentally dependent on her brother Tai. You idealized her too much and regarded Davis as inferior. I can't accept this as a Daikari fanfiction.

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

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Now onto the actual review:
Davis's eyes widened. "Really? You want to play with me?" It was odd that anyone wanted to play with him.

Please...don't torture me!

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
"Sure!" Kari said with a laugh. "It's what friends do right?"

Are u serious?!

This is cute! I've been looking for a cute fluffy Daikari for a while and I guess I finally found it. Keep the great job! :)

Cute fluff as usual! I was confused though because from the last chapter, Kari went to visit Davis. Then somehow it's fast forwarded to a completely different scene of Davis asking her out

Interesting start to a story.

I'm pretty sure I am going to get diabetes from reading this, but I'm sure it will be worth it! Daikari is my favorite DIgimon pairing and I would love to see how this story develops.

Davis is so thoughtful! Fluff galor *swoon*

cute

On the whole, I liked it. It's a sweet little piece.

The opening sequence, though, is a bit hard to parse; he 'coughed' *while* he was being pushed to the ground? The next part of the sentence also shifts too bluntly into exposition, and feels unnecessary given how the dialogue indicates the situation.

Hi Hi,

I think this has a very interesting premise and has promise for a very good story. I always love stories where the female saves the male from a bad situation in the beginning.

Its interesting to imagine Daisuke being bullied before he met Hikari. There are hints that she may have been his first friend thus why he was so attached to her. This is an interesting way for that friendship turned romance to begin.

The story sounded very familiar though. Have you ever posted it before? I can't recall where I read it, but I somehow remember this story.

Its a bit hard to imagine Davis being bullied as he comes off someone that others would naturally want to be friends with because of his confidence.

I feel like some of the quotes by Tai, Kari, and Davis came off as a bit stiff. Some of the dialogue didn't flow too well especially towards the end.

I love the foreshadowing done at the end of this chapter.

Itll be interesting to see where you go with this story. I'm heading to bed now. Good night!

Until next time,.
Keep it up!
Neo