Hi, your story is very detailed and the plot is interesting. My only complaint, is the way Lance is treated by the rest of the team as an idiot. I personally see Lance as someone with a lot of potential, someone who is caring and loyal, and takes important things seriously. He keeps the team together, and I was surprised when it said that Keith hated him. I always thought ,in my view, they were close friends that trusted the other, as teammates, and co-leaders of Voltron. Also, I figured everyone would know by now, that Lance has so much skills and capabilities that makes him a true paladin of Voltron. I just thought I should point this out, since Lance often tends to be a undervalued character. Either ways, this is a very good story with a creative plot. And hey, Pidge gets a lot of spotlight shed on her!

It was beautiful. Thank you for this amazing story.

i think it was perfect where you ended it

that was amazing

I love this story. I love this chapter. I love Lance unknowingly re-breaking Pidge’s leg. (That is what happened, right?) I love Pidge hoping that no one will remember her legs. And finally, I love Hunk remembering Pidge’s legs ten minutes later.

Tsk tsk Pidge Pidge Pidge.

How stupid could she be? She’ll damage her legs even more!

Really good!

I liked that chapter.

I wonder what dhiro’s Idea is

One of theses days lance’s big mouth is either going to earner him a big fat knuckle sandwich in the mouth or going to land him in serious hot water ( or both)

Nice to have you back :)
Good chapter, with nice progress. It fleshes out the story nicely.

Thanks for sharing!

Love it! Can’t wait for more!

YAAAAAY! HIATUS OVER! Loved this chapter! Can’t wait for the cosmic storm and the next episode arc!

Uh oh...Shiro what are you doing?

Lol kind of a weird feeling to have an update where Pidge is awake but not in it at all. Lol

Thanks for the heads up, and it will be nice to see your next ideas when you get back from this story's hiatus :)

And thanks again for sharing :D

Whata great chapter! Take all the time you need just don't forgot about this fanfic :P :)

that was awesome.

boy lance reaaaaaaallly should learn to keep his mouth quiznacking shut around keith involving past incidents. I think the team needed that laughter after what they went through

ooooh boy... romelle so doesn't realize what she's in for regarding earth etiquette

that was phenomenal