Reviews for Diabolus est Melodiam
KingOfEternity chapter 1 . 7/17
Essence of the Archmage
By consuming the essence of the Archmage you gain several boons
*Perfect memory with infinite storage
*Beyond genius level intellect
*Capacity to learn any 'magic' even unique ones upon seeing it once or understanding enough about it. This also includes things like Ki, Chakra, soul power, etc.
*Possess a supernatural reactor that can adapt to any supernatural energy to fuel spells, enchantments, powers, etc. this reactor provides a steady supply of power that will grow over time, right now you could use high consumption abilities with wild abandon and still not make much of a dent after a few hours.
*Can teach others systems even if they previously lacked the capacity.
*Manipulate entire systems or combine then with experimentation.
Hello devil slayer, god slayer and dragon slayer magics.
Outgund chapter 22 . 7/14
How does the regular citizens not recognize the lady dantalion? Especially if they were filming her. Elias cant mind wipe every one in the city
Outgund chapter 21 . 7/14
You managed to write a riser phenex that i actually like.
Outgund chapter 20 . 7/14
Does he not have observation haki?
Outgund chapter 7 . 7/13
R we ignoring that grayfia was a dude?
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 25 . 7/8
Just knockout the stupid brat and do it yourself idiots! Why the fuck do you need that ntat anyway! He's nothing but trouble!
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 23 . 7/8
Hmm... has he tried shadow clones yet? Would make life a whole lot easier.
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 2 . 7/7
7 would have been a better number than 5. Much more significant.
Bearmauls chapter 21 . 7/6
Heh, accidentally making friends.
Bearmauls chapter 10 . 7/6
I'm finding some of the unnamed characters and non-Elias perspective sections difficult to follow or place in context. I'm assuming that's intentional and things will become clearer in the future?
Bearmauls chapter 3 . 7/6
Dark, but interesting. I like the complexity you added to the parents. Not something that typically shows up in a self-insert.
asgeorge602603 chapter 26 . 6/28
Loved your story. Waiting for more chapters
Mastersgtjames chapter 25 . 6/20
obviously artyom is the vampire or something. not related to them at all. Just setting them up and crap. Whole situation feels dumb.
Mastersgtjames chapter 22 . 6/20
binder does not allow people to jack the senses of the essence holder. I get the telepathic communication. I can even get the MC being able to tap those senses of the people he has bound. but the reverse is not true. it does not work that way.
Mastersgtjames chapter 11 . 6/20
Sigh... Author has obviously completely nerfed the MC's Essences. He should have NO problems copying and controlling destruction. Or ANY ability/MAGIC for that matter. But nooooo. The author has MC constantly brainfarting and going into existential crisis'. This story reads less like an Essence/cyoa and more like just a standard devil story. Just throwing around the archmage and binding when useful for the plot, but otherwise treating them like nothing. I mean. He should already be OP. like, Franklin Richards, creating his own universe, OP.
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