Reviews for Diabolus est Melodiam |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Essence of the Archmage By consuming the essence of the Archmage you gain several boons *Perfect memory with infinite storage *Beyond genius level intellect *Capacity to learn any 'magic' even unique ones upon seeing it once or understanding enough about it. This also includes things like Ki, Chakra, soul power, etc. *Possess a supernatural reactor that can adapt to any supernatural energy to fuel spells, enchantments, powers, etc. this reactor provides a steady supply of power that will grow over time, right now you could use high consumption abilities with wild abandon and still not make much of a dent after a few hours. *Can teach others systems even if they previously lacked the capacity. *Manipulate entire systems or combine then with experimentation. Hello devil slayer, god slayer and dragon slayer magics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How does the regular citizens not recognize the lady dantalion? Especially if they were filming her. Elias cant mind wipe every one in the city |
![]() ![]() ![]() You managed to write a riser phenex that i actually like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does he not have observation haki? |
![]() ![]() ![]() R we ignoring that grayfia was a dude? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just knockout the stupid brat and do it yourself idiots! Why the fuck do you need that ntat anyway! He's nothing but trouble! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... has he tried shadow clones yet? Would make life a whole lot easier. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 7 would have been a better number than 5. Much more significant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, accidentally making friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm finding some of the unnamed characters and non-Elias perspective sections difficult to follow or place in context. I'm assuming that's intentional and things will become clearer in the future? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dark, but interesting. I like the complexity you added to the parents. Not something that typically shows up in a self-insert. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story. Waiting for more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() obviously artyom is the vampire or something. not related to them at all. Just setting them up and crap. Whole situation feels dumb. |
![]() ![]() ![]() binder does not allow people to jack the senses of the essence holder. I get the telepathic communication. I can even get the MC being able to tap those senses of the people he has bound. but the reverse is not true. it does not work that way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh... Author has obviously completely nerfed the MC's Essences. He should have NO problems copying and controlling destruction. Or ANY ability/MAGIC for that matter. But nooooo. The author has MC constantly brainfarting and going into existential crisis'. This story reads less like an Essence/cyoa and more like just a standard devil story. Just throwing around the archmage and binding when useful for the plot, but otherwise treating them like nothing. I mean. He should already be OP. like, Franklin Richards, creating his own universe, OP. |