Reviews for The Pyramid of Life
Jimbo Eskrick chapter 1 . 6/28
needs commars
Beast Of Destiny chapter 23 . 6/25
This is brilliant. Just brilliant. I thought some of the familial love stuff was somewhat cringeworthy but I LOVED all yh
Iwillwritegoodoneday chapter 23 . 6/6
It was grand .
Gaming and Readnig 4ever chapter 23 . 5/28
When is the update coming? This is good, so so good
sloksingh45 chapter 22 . 5/27
Please update soon
sloksingh45 chapter 1 . 5/27
I like it please continue
Eragon135790 chapter 23 . 5/27
great great ff i hope this ff will be continued somewhen.
Eragon135790 chapter 18 . 5/27
great ff but i think it would have been better if his parents would have "stayed" dead.
Eragon135790 chapter 11 . 5/27
hadnt he wanted to get peters spider too?
Eragon135790 chapter 7 . 5/27
great ff and a questio of interest. why does he want to be a hero? help once here help once there ok but a hero? he woudnt even be allowed to kill.
Eragon135790 chapter 4 . 5/26
i understand that he his nice cause his parens are usefull but why does he care about them? they arent even his 'real' parents.
Rakaan chapter 1 . 5/24
Several names not capitalized is a huge red flag. Seeing grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure issues, even after apparent "minor corrections and rewrites" as stated at the bottom of the page...This is a hard pass.
Kenrio chapter 2 . 5/14
Wow, it's impossible to read, i more feel now stupid read 2 chapte
Guest chapter 10 . 5/11
Another story with the immortal shit
Helily chapter 23 . 4/16
Always a fun surprise. That’s what it was like reading this.

Thank you for the adventure.
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