Reviews for The Pyramid of Life |
---|
Jimbo Eskrick chapter 1 . 6/28 needs commars |
Beast Of Destiny chapter 23 . 6/25 This is brilliant. Just brilliant. I thought some of the familial love stuff was somewhat cringeworthy but I LOVED all yh |
Iwillwritegoodoneday chapter 23 . 6/6 It was grand . |
Gaming and Readnig 4ever chapter 23 . 5/28 When is the update coming? This is good, so so good |
sloksingh45 chapter 22 . 5/27 Please update soon |
sloksingh45 chapter 1 . 5/27 I like it please continue |
Eragon135790 chapter 23 . 5/27 great great ff i hope this ff will be continued somewhen. |
Eragon135790 chapter 18 . 5/27 great ff but i think it would have been better if his parents would have "stayed" dead. |
Eragon135790 chapter 11 . 5/27 hadnt he wanted to get peters spider too? |
Eragon135790 chapter 7 . 5/27 great ff and a questio of interest. why does he want to be a hero? help once here help once there ok but a hero? he woudnt even be allowed to kill. |
Eragon135790 chapter 4 . 5/26 i understand that he his nice cause his parens are usefull but why does he care about them? they arent even his 'real' parents. |
Rakaan chapter 1 . 5/24 Several names not capitalized is a huge red flag. Seeing grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure issues, even after apparent "minor corrections and rewrites" as stated at the bottom of the page...This is a hard pass. |
Kenrio chapter 2 . 5/14 Wow, it's impossible to read, i more feel now stupid read 2 chapte |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/11 Another story with the immortal shit |
Helily chapter 23 . 4/16 Always a fun surprise. That’s what it was like reading this. Thank you for the adventure. |