Well, another mistake is that you gave vitality to dragons when they are eternal

I know I commented once a month on your story, but I will say it again. Your story is good, but it has its mistakes.

In my last comment I said that Issei's desire to have a harem and be king of the harem was not really his, because his ideals of that dream were "inherited" by other people, for example, Issei's grandfather and that old pervert in the park.

Also issei whenever he was influenced by others, since he was a child, of course, issei's perverse actions were his, but however he was influenced by others, issei never had a dream or goals that he can call his own.

Another thing I want to talk about is that Issei is no longer a friend of Matsuda and Motohma, because to be honest I never saw them as "true friends" for Issei, I also want to mention that Ericia Draculea reminds me a lot of Cornelia Li Britannia from Code Geass. Because of her personality, I also think that the physical appearance of Ericia would be like Cornelia would fit her better.

If you have not seen code geass I recommend you see it.

To finish I can give you some suggestions for your story:
can make fuuki have the ability to transform into a giant fox like yasaka
Vali has the ark of the clan of the goddesses of Nanatsu no Tazai, because it makes sense that Vali has the ark because he is a descendant of the original Lucifer in addition to being the first angel to fall and also would be the opposite of Issei who the latter has abilities from the Nanatsu no Tazai demon clan.
you make the rias team fight against the issei team in the azazel cup certain combats that can happen for example:
vs kiba
vs rias
vs akeno
vs roseweise or xenovia

Please let issei use cruel sun with his hellblaze

Noted mistakes, Issei is eternal, his body made up of Red and Ophis gave him unlimited life expectancy and potential. Why I do not occupy the diabolos dragon? He has access to that form as long as he has his new body and Ddraig. Well, apart from those two details everything is fine.

Author-san please come back i really miss your work

Author-san, please come back. Atleast wrote till Rias and all meet him once again. Just want to read their reaction.
Also, thanks for writing such a beautiful story.

Please continue this it is the best story I have read on this site!

update?

waiting for an update, great job and keep up the good work!

I think the author is alive as the number of favorite stories has increased, weeks ago it was 190 stories but now more than 230 stories are happening. I have also noticed details that were not in the previous chapters.
This story really has a lot of potential, but it has its own mistakes,
For example, in Chapter 7: Vampire of the King, Ericia mentions that her father took the position of king after the murder of the previous king, but this is strange since in the same chapter, Ericia mentions that her father was the only son of Dracula, then it means that dracula participated in the civil war, that doesn't make sense

Changing the subject, I would like to mention that in Chapter 9: The Ruins of the World, Issei mentions that all his perverted actions were the result of not being alone. I think it makes sense since in the light novel it is mentioned that Issei became perverted due that his childhood was badly influenced by an old pervert in the park who told him erotic things, but shortly afterwards the old pervert was arrested, but there was also Issei's grandfather who also told him erotic things, in the canon it is mentioned that issei had a good relationship with his grandfather, issei's grandfather died when issei was a childI think that when these people left, that must have emotionally affected Issei and from there arose the desperate desire not to be alone.
Also, that leaves the question of whether issei's dream of having a harem was really his, but this story is good because it showed us that issei no longer wants to continue those stupid ideas and take life more seriously, but also wants clean his reputation as a sekiryuutei.

It would be interesting that during the Azazel Cup, Issei reveals his identity to everyone and starts talking about himself and says that the foolish, ignorant, and perverted Issei Hyoudou is gone forever and now the new and improved Issei Hyoudou is here to stay and will never back down

I hope your life gotten better and also will waiting of course in the end this is best Dxd fanfic

I’m eagerly waiting for your next update but for now I have been re-reading this story for the fifth time and I gotta say, it’s holds up as the best dxd betrayal story on this site.

I cannot wait for the time issei reveals himself to the supernatural world during the tournament. Not only to see the reactions to issei change of power but his appearance(I’m sure panties will drop at the sight of him). Though I’m a little disappointed that there’s no other consequences for awaken ones aura prematurely. I know there’s the mental and emotional change but there’s no PHYSICAL repercussions, to essentially unlocking a dragon’s full potential WAY sooner than should of been. Examples like; headaches, hallucinations, drowsiness, strain/pain to the body.

I wonder what the repercussions are when the girls find other issei lied to them about his remaining life-span. Keeping secrets is one thing, we all have our own secrets we wish to keep but actually lying to people that not only he trust but loves and cares for is another. Like issei said in this chapter, “trust takes a long time to form and seconds to break. And when it breaks, it leads to betrayal.” This statement actually make issei a hypocrite. where he’s all about wanting people’s trust but lies to them as well, breaking their trust in him. Yae will probably take it the easiest as she just joined the team but fuuki and ericia would be absolutely furious. Maybe even doubting the trust he has for them or the sincerity of his feelings for them. Regardless of his reasoning to protect them but they won’t see it like that, they would think he doesn’t trust them with important information like his own wellbeing. So I’m looking forward to that drama when the fallout happens.

Yo! This is like one of the best story i have read of issei being betrayed ! The other one is a fools heart but that not important. I see that his group has different races. Well i would like if you were to add different types of race into his grp! That would be wonderful! And if that is not possible, at least would you be kind enough to consider my ideas? Like weapons from various pantheons such as given gae bolg or knowledge or skills/abilities or whatever that fancies your eyes! For example from persian myth, chinese myth or even egyptian myth! It would be awesome! Oh and i was hoping that before the tournament commence, would you make him lose virginity to fuuki? I mean that would make it better as he is not hunted by his pass and can fight properly. Plus, she's the first, technically a alpha so its only natural. Well this is just a suggestion. And i see that the girls that were not present, they will join him(?), like rossweise a valkyrie and kuroka a nekoshou. This just proves my point of his group having all type of people! And i have a feeling when they face shiva in the tournament(oh Im sure they will), shiva will forfeit at the end, cause she does not want to hurt her daughter. Well whatever, but keep up the outstanding work! Don't listen to unnecessary cristism of others, it's not worth it! Well once again i hope you will put my ideas into noble consideration !

Best high school dxd fanfic update plss

really like your story "The change of a dragon"
One of the main reasons why I like your story is the fact that Issei has true purposes and objectives.
Some examples of this are that Issei wants to travel the world to know new things and wants to help others who suffered like him.
I understand that you probably have little time to write more chapters due to the coronavirus situation, you said you were a student at the university, so I think you do not publish due to school and homework.
But i want to know if you have other things planned besides the azazel cup and issei's personal problems for example you can use these ideas:
1. The alliance of hell will appear in your story that, by the way, I think Isthar's sister should join that group.
the vampires who survived in the civil war that ericia mentioned, discover that ericia was released from the seal and also that if, the vampire faction wants ericia to become the leader of the vampires, since ericia's family were the original rulers
Issei and Fuuki go to a meeting requested by Amaterasu and Yasaka to talk about the unfair treatment Fuuki received by the Yokais who imprisoned her only for being a descendant of Tamamo No Mae.
war Indra plans against Shiva.