He only gets laid once actually but aside from that, the story was an entertaining read, there aren't too many stories for Monster Girl Encyclopedia and there's even less crossover fanfics for it.

Ah, a Dwarf making a Troy reference.

God damn this is getting intense for a fanfic!

This chapter is awesome! Good work man.

I'm glad that Theo and Lyca are reunited after what happened with the orcs. I'm a bit concern for the young couple if they are heading towards the kingdoms under the control of the Order. A bunch of monster haters who take advantage over the people using religion while killing people who don't how down to them. Also, is there a chance they might go to Lescatie and meet the Fallen Maidens before they turn into mamono?
If I was in Theo's shoes, I would head for Midland instead of the Orderlands.

Personal question... Will Theo get Lyca knocked off and get her pregnant. I bet he would make a good dad. Not only that, it would be nice for him and Lyca to start a family while traveling together.

Good luck with your story. Peace out.

Ok you have my interest and I' am glad that this story is still active. You know how to write an adventure. The monologues and dialogues are well thought out and characters are realistically portrayed so far. You do not shy away in incorporating serious and disturbing issues in your story.

One of the strongest point this story has is its characters. They are endearing and engaging to read. While I hesitated on continuing this fic due to the fluff scene of Theo and Lyca. I assumed that this would become a dull sex-centric relationship. I'm glad that I was proven wrong since, yes they did have sex without prior relationship of any kind, you made the story interesting by having their relationship develop in a realistic manner. I hope that this carries on to the future harem. Though I advise you to not pull the same stunt on all of the future harem members or else it will become too predictable and may get old. Have different and dynamic relationships with the others in the future to keep it fresh and interesting.

Now for this chapter, your battle sequence is good, however you might want to recheck your paragraphs and sentences. There was an increase of grammatical errors during those scenes. The mistakes were usually misused pronouns and incomplete sentences. While they are not as bad or jarring like the other fanfics, you ought to be mindful in the future to avoid the increase of mistakes.

Do not rush. Take your time in your research. Watch videos about medieval culture and warfare. With that said, I wish the best of luck in this story.

Awesome update man keep em coming

Glad to see some Dwarves still roaming around, even though the current Demon Lord almost made the original fantasy people extinct into horny sex monsters. I hope Theo could see them again, since he is a nerd plus a modern knowledge. He could use those to make something that could benefit for dwarven people.

Fan fact: If you going to browse to MGE fandom and click the QnA forum of Kenkou Cross. He stated that Dwarf and Elf Males still exists. They are hiding from new demon Lord, they believed of demonic exposure will lead into monster transformation or sex deviant.

As much as many people know it's a harem story, but I doubt Rezuta is one of them. I kinda see her as an Esdeath kinda lady, who in her final moments will never get the love she desires. Overall you did pretty good.

The way you choreographed Theo in his fight with The Brute, it told me even in pain and exhausted, especially lacking combat experience he was willing to adapt to his surroundings and find a way to fight back against that butt ugly motherfucker.

You want advice, try watching some fights, read about strategy, look at what they can do and study from there. Overall, just make sure your characters with their prowess, armor and tactics are consistent with each other. So far you did good, but don't get cocky, because if what I'm getting out of this is true, You're going to have your characters get into more trouble.

I see the TFS reference there :) Good shit.

I love that the plot's progressing now, but it looks like there'll be one final fight. I think it'll be a fantastic way to develop Theo!

Keep up the good work.

The Theo-Lyca relationship is insanely wholesome, you did a really good job on characterization for them both. I'm looking forward to seeing how Rezuta's character develops later on.

Magnificent. Absolutely magnificent. Well done as always my friend.

Fantastic chapter Fam. Loved the battle scene, I was on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see the other half, humans, and their cruelty toward monsters. Also, loved the DBZ Abridged reference. Can't wait for next chapter!

Great chapter. Well worth the wait.

Was that a DBZ Abridged reference there at the end?

This chapter was pretty amazing. I am pleased with how it went. I also really like how Rezuta still wants Theo back and is now hunting him down. I really hope she does not just settle for a different man and keeps her heart on Theo. I can't wait for what comes next.

Amazing please continue