wah! i bit hard to follow, and so, so good! love the ending.

Another beautiful story! I loved it, it was so well written. I like how the crew's relationships with Luffy were highlighted without feeling forced or unnatural.

So beautiful, love the notes of angst and the melody of nakamaship! I could read this all day long~ really great, a little gripping, some nice continuity, and imagery I just adore. Most of all we have Luffy being his lovable loyal self- so good!
Thanks for writing this, I love it : )

It is so lovely, just one chapter and you made me cry with how Luffy interacts with the world. I an so happy that I took the chance to read this.