SG:1/HP/SW/MacGyver/Airwolf/Knight Rider crossover w/ time travel and a nazi Ba'al... I love this story and I can't wait for an update! Keep up the good work!

I've been wanting to find a good long story to read for quite some time, come across some good ones, but I'm really enjoying it... Really enjoying it! Thank you thank you so very much for writing it and sharing it with us! You've done a wonderful job at really capturing so many of the character quirks.

I just think that you missed out on a prime joke in chapter 6... "Jaffa Java" we've been so much better a name for the coffee shop on Chulak. that one middle statement aside, I'm going to go back to reading this wonderful story about a cute little girl turning the oh so grumpy Jack into giant puppy dog for her to play with.

Premise sounds good, written well, so well i have no problem reading it in the actors voices. Definitely will read more.

First off I have to say, this is one of the most detailed oriented Stargate stories I've read to date. My hat is off to you. I really feel that this storytelling reads just like episodes from the TV series. I enjoy how some of the events are just on the cusp of being unbelievable before you back away and reground it in the universe.

Now the most annoying thing about this story so far is the nanite war. Changing timelines, back and forth between realities, back to the almost original timeline, and now this! Don't misunderstand, I love it, but it is starting to feel tired and dragged out, much like the Ori wars was with the TV series. If that is your intention, to make the reader want that story arc to end, then I applaud you for it. Or maybe shame on you for manipulating my emotions like that, lol.

A much more minor issue is the use of a wrong word. Depository. While yes the word loosely fits what it is, the correct word, and used in the TV series is, Repository. There are some misspelling happening. Not because spell check is not used, but because grammar check is not used. Words like Her instead if Here, Far instead of For, etc. One thing I highly recommend is to say what you typed out loud if you don't have access to grammar check. Trust me, it truly works and is taught and/or reinforced in college level writing classes.

Finally I would like to say thank you for such an engaging and we'll though out story. The minor crossovers are a nice touch as well. I hope my review has helped you, the author, grow as a writer. I look forward to reading future chapters.

Great read, I want more, please.

Esta muy bueno el capitulo mas como le fue a izzy con harry mas el encuentro con director mas que adsorbió los recuerdos de hechizos magícos mas que pasa con su nuevo amigo mas que esta tramando Adria en la tierra

Interesting that Dumbles knew about the Nanites, as well as the Ancients. Hopefully, they remembered to grab his Wand before they ended up in Colorado, and maybe a few extra cloths, lol. Sadly (for us, but not Adria), but Money DOES Talk, and there is Tonnes of it in Vegas. Thank You. TTFN

good one

"Just because you find something doesn't make it yours, Izzy!"

"Um, Daniel... isn't that the entire premise behind the SGC? We found the Stargate so it is ours? We found Atlantis so it is ours? We found those ZPM so they are ours?"

"Shut up Liz, we are older than her and know better."

"And the Nox/Asgard/Goa'uld/Ancients are older than us and know better."

"You SGC grown-ups are no better than the rouge NID! Stop stealing my stuff!"

Now the Fun is going to restart, lol. The Bad Nanites thought that they could pull a fast one by sneaking Adria into the mix from a different reality, discounting that the other nanites would know about their breach of contract, and take steps to counteract it. While Adria is a powerhouse in her own right, at least she won't have the Ori backing her up, but with a wand and the nanites, she'll still be quite formidable. Adding Magic into the mix should be interesting, I wonder how old Harry is at this stage, and what Dumbles' reaction will be? Also, I wonder if Izzy actually IS a Witch, which would be Very Helpful in actually learning the New Code Words. I do hope that Harry did have his Wand with him, even while being in his jammies, before she wisked them off to Hogwarts, lol. Thank You. TTFN

Yeppers you have now crossed into weird lol

Esta muy bueno el capítulo mas como fue la llegada de Adrià a ese universo mas sus planes mas que los nanites le dieron una varita nueva a izzy mas que paso con su encuentro con harry mas que ahora debe saber hechizos

Lol! Laundry always needs done

lol good one

Esta muy bueno el capítulo mas que están tramando los nanites malvados yendo a la otra dimensión para buscar un control maestro con poder mas como le va a izzy que ya no puede usar los nanites para todo lo que hacia antes