Reviews for Louder Than Her Demons |
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studley24 chapter 15 . 6/20 This was a great story, with some nice explanation of how Hermione and ron’s and Harry and ginny’s relationships ended. I’d have liked to have seen a little explanation of the differences (ones I agree with btw) of how Sirius, Remus and Tonks’ survived etc. Other than that, a great story all round . S24 |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 6/18 I’m surprised I never reviewed the first two chapters. Harry’s Birthday party was nice, even though he had a certain unease about it — Thanks Dursleys! Harry did get his greatest present when Hermione showed up. He needed her SO much. Calling her “love” is as close as he can get right now to “I love you”. Taking Ron to task for his abandonment of Hermione was good for him to do. Would that he’d followed his own advice. Hermione’s story of meeting her parents was heartrending. Harry shouldn’t have pushed farther, but he did have the sense to back down. Sharing her bed to comfort her from her nightmare is pure Harry. I share others’ concern about the smoking. I smoked a pipe and my SOs complained. I’m going to simply posit that they’re magical cigarettes and don’t linger on the breath. TGM |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 15 . 11/5/2019 An entirely appropriate ending. I’ll be honest here. I’d read some of your one-shots and hadn’t been impressed. So I started this tale a bit hesitantly. But by the end of the first chapter, I knew this was a winner. One of my beliefs is the damaged Harry. Here you gave me a damaged Hermione too. The way in which you got them to heal each other was simply masterful. Greyback was a massive challenge, but ironically without him Hermione might have never returned. For everything to turn out so good in the end is a delight. Thank you. I’ve an idea for a Omake: H&H shortly after their marriage go to OZ and restore her parents’ memories. After the explanations and reconciliation they either stay with frequent visits from them or they return. Either way, Hermione’s world is then complete. This is in my Favorites. TGM |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 13 . 11/5/2019 It is fitting that having survived, Harry and especially Hermione can now live. TGM |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 12 . 11/5/2019 Marvelous chapter‼️‼️‼️ Greyback should have known that a werewolf is no match for an enraged Gryffindor lioness ‼️ It was only fitting that she killed him in defense of her pride. I share her ire at that third degree grilling, particularly by one of the Aurors who failed her the night before. Personally, I think Harry should sack them, but now would look like his being vindictive. The return home was perfect. TGM |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 11 . 11/5/2019 Oh snap‼️ Not that I didn’t expect something like this, but to read it is a punch to the stomach. Maybe for Hermione, her anger is ‘the power he knows not’. Reading on. TGM |
HarmonyAlways63 chapter 7 . 6/25/2019 It’s finally out and this happens...understandable. I actually prefer it this way |
HarmonyAlways63 chapter 6 . 6/25/2019 Dang so close... |
HarmonyAlways63 chapter 4 . 6/24/2019 Teddy’s a sweetheart. |
HarmonyAlways63 chapter 3 . 6/24/2019 Oh shit! I did not think that’s what she was hiding! I literally gasped when I read the letter. Who’s writing that to Hermione? Someone from the war? Hope Harry finds out so she can kick ass! |
HarmonyAlways63 chapter 2 . 6/24/2019 It’s tough to admit you need help. I’m very interested in the story can’t wait fo see how it unravels |
HarmonyAlways63 chapter 1 . 6/23/2019 PTSD it’s real man and this story is showing it. Doesn’t matter if it’s a human war or magical war, what you live through the horrors you see and experience will have an effect on you. Hermione’s was just one of the wort one during the second blood war. It’s going to take a lot to overcome or even just cope with what she and everyone else experienced and lost. |
btbasb7 chapter 15 . 6/17/2019 Absolutely wonderful! |
WizardMichi chapter 15 . 5/26/2019 I never read Harmione fics, but decided to last night. I had to binge this, it was so good. Thanks for sharing such a well though out and well written story. The characters were all fantastic and I must admit, my heart felt so full and warm having Sirius so integral, as well as The Lupins. It just felt so good. The twist to Hermione's problems definitely was unexpected but so good. I enjoyed every bit of this. |
Grahamgirl93 chapter 15 . 5/14/2019 I loved how the story came full circle with Hermione & Harry’s relationship! A wonderful little family you created for them! The story had so many emotions it was great! |