Reviews for Overdue Honeymoon
i didnt do itttt chapter 1 . 3/14
this story is really good. would to see another chapter.
BarbieGirl82 chapter 2 . 2/25
great chapter! what just happened? and where is goku?
BarbieGirl82 chapter 1 . 2/25
great chapter and cute story idea. I can't wait to read more of this. I think goku and chichi do deserve a long overdue honeymoon after everything that's happened. They rarely get the opportunity to spend time together.
multyfangirl21 chapter 3 . 1/18/2019
Ok , now I'm hoping for a story where they have their 3rd child.
ElisaJ chapter 3 . 9/28/2018
Wow! Goku did not hesitate! I wonder if there were a few Super Saiyan appearances during those sessions to help life take root in ChiChi. It’s how they got Goten. ;)
ElisaJ chapter 2 . 9/28/2018
Even when Goku and Chichi are spending much needed time together, the disaster Gods can't give them a break. Goku to the rescue of others in distress! I think otherwise that’s a very bad time to leave the wife. :p
ElisaJ chapter 1 . 9/28/2018
Love Goku lusting after Chichi and him sharing his food with her? Chichi is definitely Goku's true love! I love the image of Goku and Chichi dancing and spending time together. Lord knows this was needed in the original series.
roku1397 chapter 3 . 9/10/2018
I love this chapter. The way they comforted Rainee is really something that can happen in an official filler DB series episode.

I also commend you for writing a non pornographic lemon scene. I've read your other stories, and as far as I can remember, this is the first time you've written a lemon scene. I like it because it isn't lustful.

Eventhough Goku is not around his sons a lot of times, he is a loving dad. He is also a loving grandfather...
Anianka35 chapter 3 . 9/9/2018
I love this active and sexy pro attorney of Goku
Courtney chapter 3 . 9/9/2018
So that's the end? Aw man...well, it was a cute story. And that whole experience would make me want another kid too. Wait...is this a prequel to ATTWF?
Gosha chapter 2 . 8/27/2018
Love this so far! I wonder where Goku went? Maybe to help the other people? The interactions between them are adorable! Look forward to the next chapter!
roku1397 chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
Oh I can't believe you left us with a cliff hanger.

It seems like it wouldn't be normal, when Goku and Chichi's situation is too peaceful...
Courtney chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
Oh crap, a tropical storm/hurricane. That's what sucks about going on a vacation, you never know when the weather is going to go sideways.
roku1397 chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
Delightful story...
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2018
Great chapter! Update soon please!
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