Reviews for The Smashville Summoner
Midnight Lost chapter 5 . 8/23
And Jiraiya will pawn it off to Tsunade... at least that is usually how it goes.

Poor Hiruzen, he lost his peeping ball, and his Icha Icha collection, and even more respect from the clan heads. Old goat could have avoided all of this simply by having a spine and doing what was right.

Curious as to how Jiraiya will be portrayed, you already implied that he was obsessed with the prophecy, so he could be in on Naruto's mistreatment (maybe potentially lied to Tsunade about Naruto being dead so she stays away from the village), all so he could come in and be the mentor for the chosen one.

But that is just speculation. Looking forward to more when you get around to it.
Midnight Lost chapter 4 . 8/23
Well, I can see what you mean by shit starting to hit the fan in this chapter, Hiruzen is fucking up big time and I really don't see any way he can fix it or even hold his position as Hokage since he is losing the respect of his Shinobi and of his council, especially the Clan Heads.

Should be interesting to see how the next chapter plays out.
Midnight Lost chapter 3 . 8/23
Welp, goodbye to Kiba's little hobbit, that had to hurt.

Wonder how Tsume is going to react to that?

Too bad Kakashi didn't let Kiba get cut in half, but I think this punishment is far worse then death, lol
Midnight Lost chapter 2 . 8/22
Was confused at first when I looked up Robin from Ultimate, only saw the male version, but I found the one you were using, lol.

Her teaching style of 'The Talk' was quite amusing, and pretty sure Naruto had some really good dreams that night.

Also, great job with the actual Genin test, though kind of feel bad for Sakura, more then anyone else, because she is going to have to deal with two egotistical boys on her team.
Midnight Lost chapter 1 . 8/22
He he he, poor Kiba (not), getting knocked out, urinating himself, and then getting his rump torched.

Kind of a shame he wasn't awake long enough to hear Hinata proclaim that she would be willing to share Naruto with other women, because that is probably his biggest fantasy. But for the best, he probably would have tossed a fit the size of the Hokage monument.

Going to read what you have up before I toss any names for potential additions.
FenreldStormblade chapter 5 . 8/22
not a bad story by any means, I just wonder how Naruto will react to this attack and the news of who his parents are/were.
Lauren Thorn chapter 1 . 8/22
I hope Luigi becomes Naruto's adoptive dad
Story Artist chapter 5 . 6/24
This story is great! I love the idea and concept behind it all. I just fell like it's moving a little too fast.
Romance Breeding chapter 5 . 6/24
Ok, I really want to see Byleth, Palutena, and Corrin added to the harem.

And now, there is a new girl that HAS to be in the harem: Min Min! Those two are both ramen lovers. They are practically made for each other!

PLEASE at least consider this!
BigNewsSHARE7 chapter 5 . 6/24
Ok, the new fighter has just been announced: It's Min Min from "ARMS"! Oh my gosh, I can't wait to play with this character. And I really can't wait to see her and Naruto meeting!
Blizzard Blood Wolf77 chapter 5 . 5/14
I was hoping for Joker to do his All-Out Attack on the old goat, he deserved it since he believes nobody should ever know and learns of Naruto's lineage and heritence, because he thinks Naruto isn't ready and never would be, as long as he keeps the jinchuriki in the village and under his thumb, as he lets everyone hurt him either physically, finacially and mentally, he doesn't care.

At least the bloodline thief is taken care of, though I do feel bad for Ganondorf having to go and look for evidence, he might have to ask for help on looking for the past 30 years of it, since Shimura would want to keep tabs on everything he believes should be his, even if it means kidbapping from other countries to increase his soulless army
Phantom Frost chapter 5 . 4/27
Cool story so far im really enjoying the idea of the smash universe as a summons though im curious if dark samus, fox, or the toon zelda characters are going to appear or if they are just fused into the one zelda and link if not i was hoping tetra could be added to the harem since she is honestly one of my favorite versions of zelda
Guest chapter 5 . 4/17
Great chapter and please update whenever you can.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6
Great chapter and please update soon.
AeroJester203 chapter 5 . 3/28
Given that Ganodorf and Ganon are one and the same, I guess Giga Bowser and Bowser are too.

Now, onto the review, I really enjoyed this story. Was kinda disappointed about Sarutobi not being in Naruto's corner, but it's far from the first time I've seen it. Danzo dying instead of escaping is a surprise, but there are other threats to take his place - far bigger ones from how Tabuu was described in hushed tones.

Honestly, I'm okay with the likes of Bowser and Ganondorf being aligned Chaotic Good. With everyone in the Smashville living more-or-less in harmony (save differing alliances like Pit and Dark Pit), it makes sense that they'd be helping instead of scheming. Viridi's presence is a little odd since she's not s fighter and I don't recall her being an assist trophy, but she WAS in the game as a part of the easter egg in Skyworld.

Not sure how personal grudges - like Ridley killing Samus' parents or K. Rool trying to blow up the DK Isles - got sorted out, but the result seems to have worked out. Unless their independent universes don't exist in this continuity, so it's only the personalities that clash at times. Massive crises like the incidents with both Tabuu along with Galeem and Dharkon where everybody had to band together probably helped towards that coexistence.

As for members of the harem, I'm not sure yet. If I think of some, I'll shoot a PM, unless the opportunity to post suggestions has passed already. Either way, can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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