Player:I ROLL TO SUDUSE THE DRAGON
DM: ok
Player: *rolls* NAT 20
DM: *hits head on wall* THE DRAGON IS SUDUSEED

Please write more, it’s really good.

ok, i NEED a new chapter pLEASEEEEE

This story is one of the best I have ever read! Please, continue writing!

Okay, so, I know that you probably won’t se this, but, here are some suggestions that I have in my mind for where this story can go. Hopefully they will inspire you to keep writing :)

1. Daniel is in the graveyard and Voldemort decides to posses Daniel with the imperious curse or something. Daniel returns and tries to kill Harry, but fails, resulting in a questioning from Dumbledore (sort of like dumbledore’s questioning of crouch junior).

2. Dumbledore decides to track Harry personally and sees Harry and Ginny’s amazing talents. He decides to ask them about it/ get their memories while their sleeping, and realizes that Harry is the chosen one all along.

3. Harry could be flirting with Ginny and nervously run his hand through his hair resulting in him showing his scar to Ginny (and everyone in the room).

4. Like in my first suggestion, Voldemort could posses Daniel and during Harry’s Firth year he could be constantly trying to kill him.

4.5. While Daniel is trying to kill Harry, a teacher overheard him calling Harry “the bot who lived” and decides to tell Dumbledore, which leads to an investigation.

5. At the end, or when Harry is revealed to be the chosen one, either Daniel can be cast out (which might actually be more satisfying to the readers) or they might accept him back after he apologizes. (Or maybe he becomes so bitter and angry at not being the boy who lived, that he sides with Voldemort.

I hope this can help, keep up the good work!

You wrote this saying you wanted to finish someone else’s unfinished story and now this is going unfinished. I hope that you come back to finish this story because I know that it can be a fantastic story but you need to work to complete it.

I love it please please add more

Why the hell didn't you write the end? It is an excellent story, I was into it sooo much.
I'm begging you, I know it's been almost a year but still pleeeaase write the end of the story, otherwise I won't be able to sleep wondering what could've been the end.

This is beautiful :)

This story is really good. I know the struggles of having writers block, but I hope you upload a new chapter soon because I'm really enjoying this fanfic.

more what happens next!

This is a nice piece of work. A grey Harry where the focus of being the chosen one isn't on him, leaving him feeling neglected and down until Ginny comes into his life. So while Daniel is spoiled rotten by everyone, Harry uses this to his advantages to better his powers by learning about magic at a very young age. I'm glad also you got them together and finalized their bond during the yule ball dance, nice touch only having Lily, Moody and Dumbledore the only ones to see their aura. Lily would be joyful and a little scared, knowing what this mean for the young couple. Moody (depending if it's the real or Barty crouch one) would be in two minds at what he witnessed. Dumbledore however, will start realizing he might have made a mistake on who was really the chosen one. Unfortunately for him, the damage has already been done. Neither Harry nor Ginny will ever trust him after what he put them trough. If it helps with writers block on this (as I really enjoyed it and have a bit of an imagination) I have a few ideas that where this will lead if you'd like to read them. Anyway Keep cool can't wait for another chapter when you can.

Please update

I loved the ending, i'm glad they got there in the end.

I would love a sequel to this story, maybe you could write about how Lilly would be able to tell Harry about soul mates? Since he still doesn't understand.

Also, what about James Potter? Will he ever reconcile with Harry?

Anyway i hope you get over your writers block and i wish you all the best.

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