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HOW DARE?

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This is not okay. I am not okay. How dare you.

I read your fanfiction and I find it very interesting. That you turn the whole entire gaia manuscript backward. Instead of Dark Gaia is destroy the planet. Light Gaia is destroy the planet. I love the plot because it is interested to read about light Gaia begin evil. I will check up with your story and keep up the good work.

pretty good

I read this story a few weeks ago, and I finally found the time to write a review. It's super disappointing there are not more reviews... it deserves so much more!
Well anyways.

The story does not mess around with establishing what's going on and gets to the point fast. If there's any way a Sonic fanfic should start out it's fast and to the point. So I really appriciate that there isn't long winded paragraphs waxing on and on about how the openning scene is supposed to look like. Besides, the reader should already know what is going on since this is based on the cinamtic openning to Unleashed. Long establishing paragraphs would just be unnecessary in my opinion.

The times there were chunks of description the word choice was just so interesting I had a fun time reading through it. Such as:
"All around was violent red and expansive black. Gleaming metal reared challengingly against impassive space, the cold light of the stars mingling with the harsh fluorescent lights. The worst of the lights were the eyes. Bright purple warning signals, glaring from the top of advancing steel bodies.

He chuckled. This would be fun."

I just love how the first paragraph established how impressive and threatening the situation is and Sonic just blows it off in two short fragmented sentence. So much attitude in so few words. Just as Sonic should be. Spot on characterization, if I do say so myself, and I do say so.

Furthermore, I think Sonic's overconfidence displayed in the cinamtic openning is conveyed really well in-story, especially here:
"Again, the hedgehog didn't rush. He didn't need to. For all the ingenuity of the machine and its pilot, it was not lightning, it was not a force of nature. It was just another toy to smash."

The notion that defeating Eggman is so routine for Sonic by now is an amusing one. Too bad for Sonic it bites him in a few scenes.
Ha, you'd think Sonic would've realized that he's not invincible with the Emeralds after Knuckles knocked them out of him, but eh. Sonic's not exactly known for introspection and reflection.

Sonic's connection with the Chaos Emeralds is fascinating, and this chapter left me wanting to know more about it. I am always interested when an author explores the characteristics, capabilities, and the interactions characters have with the Emeralds. From what I gather Sonic can communicate with them in this story to some extent? If him "calling" on them and them reacting to the "signal" is any indication, at least.
He also seems to be perpetually connected to the Emeralds? If his reaction to them being forcefully ripped away from him is also any indication, anyways.
This whole part of the story is awesome. The 180 in Sonic's attitude of overconfidence to dread and horror is so intense. The following scene of what it was like for the foreign energy to invade Sonic's very being was just so... it gave me chills. I was so immersed in the scene I didn't want it to end.
Then Sonic goes from a "he" to an "it" and it's like oooooh, that ain't Sonic anymore, is it?
In the game I found it odd that Sonic was self-aware and conscious right after transforming into a Werehog. I think him not being in control makes more sense and adds to the seriousness of what the consequences the transformation holds for him are.

Overall, a solid start to an interesting story,
Thank you for writing it.

Shadow is so cool,fast,and edgy..XD awesome chapter. It's lit fam!;D

Uuuuuu...Enter Shadow...3 Ouch.. The edge...XD

This chapter seems comfy with the fire and that jazz. XD That bat sure would always steal gems. Typical, Rouge. XD

It's true though...pretzel. XD Technically, it's not stealing since it's Sonic's. Anywho, keep it up my friend

This is a super interesting concept! I think the story is of to a nice start. Looking forward to where youll go with this.

wha...XD eyy, this fic is actually nice. Great work and keep it up