Reviews for Militaries San Dimension
AmethystPone chapter 5 . 8/30
And it's a dewd story...
AmethystPone chapter 3 . 8/30
Uh...Planetune Does have flying battleships. Enough that they can afford to sell off to wealthy private individuals...
ptl chapter 5 . 11/19/2019
Love your narrative style. I’ll try to complement it in my stories.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/10/2019
Continúe please
tphod chapter 4 . 10/31/2018
I have only one thing to say. MK. 22 a dogoo to slurp it up, preferably in front of others.
kerrowe chapter 5 . 10/26/2018
Seems like something ia going to happen on Snake's side soon.
Least there's multiple things going on in different areas that's is nice!
Liked the chapter though it's pretty calm for now.
blacksoul123 chapter 4 . 10/3/2018
Good story i have been waitong for this. But consider making them a bit more longer
Kushalala chapter 3 . 10/2/2018
Lol, even in fanfics neptune has the ability to break the 4th wall xD. wonder how ocelot will get along with neptune and her friends
flitterflux chapter 4 . 10/3/2018
Is Lid or K-sha going to show up? They're both somewhat related to Metal Gear( Lid represents MG and K-sha is Konami). Maybe K-sha can be a villain for MSF or something.
kerrowe chapter 4 . 10/3/2018
Neat. The nation of soldiers in action.
If that generator thing is ever important it's probably because power rerouting...
On a sidenote least Chico can act on that dream of his now! Haha.

Oh? Wonder what makes Snake worthy of the phone... Ehe.
Meanjojo chapter 4 . 10/3/2018
Another fun chapter my dude. Things are certainly picking up.

For your story ideas, I vote for Command and Conquer X RWBY. Especially with your writing style, I want to see characters be weirded out at armies amassing outta nowhere and fighting Grimm and whomever else.
Smashgunner chapter 4 . 10/3/2018
Oooooo. Conflict! And I like the personality you've given the MSF soldiers. But I can't help but wonder what Amanda expects with Chico. At least the kid gets to find actual monsters though. Great Chapter as always, Can't wait for the next one. Toodles!
condeale chapter 3 . 9/16/2018
sorry for delaying xd, but your chapter was good, I liked the Snake eating fish, poor if, did not have enough stomach xd. With the things that you add too much snake will have to get missions for him and his people (I imagine getting helicopters or sending Jeeps or tanks with soldiers to protect transports xd, or cramming the guild to get local money xd), hahahahaha poor snake no It fits with the Moe of Neptunia XD, although it is easy to make your harem (or any MSF staff that has good performance). the meeting with the sisters nep was funny xd, I want to see how it would be when you meet the rest of the people of MSF xd, finalizing you left me with the intrigue of the chronology, you will tell the plot of mk2 / rebirth2 or modify it for you fanfic (I can not get rid of the snake's head riding the ZEKE with the others against the CFW, with an epic sword to the ZEKE and giving a battalion mgr against Brave with the ost of armstrong xd), finally I look forward to the next chapter xd
Blacksoul123 chapter 3 . 9/14/2018
So is this story going to have a cpu in motherbase like the other similar crossover that i have already read but in any case it going pretty well so please dont stop realising chapters i hope to see more
kerrowe chapter 3 . 9/14/2018
Things were quite cute! Like with that fish and Nep's goofing off! Also the 4th wall bit about her chest.

Well those physics wreaking things are a bit as high end as the ole' sleep gas fulton balloon cannon, stealth beam gun and the Human slingshot. (Lol)
So probably won't even see it till after Mother base fixes itself and does some research anyways.
I wonder what you had in mind for the mixing though aside from the Idroid though...
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