| Reviews for Traveler's Spartan |
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   Fletcher Bamford chapter 5 . 11/17/2019 You gunna pick this back up again? I absolutely loved it so please do. Massive destiny fan so if you need help lemme know I’d be happy to |
| Mem285 chapter 1 . 8/17/2019 Mmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrŕyyyyyyyyyy sssssssssssuuuuuuuuueeeeeeeee oc, why? |
| Gohadric chapter 1 . 10/17/2018 Aight, i have yet to read, but one thing already bugs me. It isn’t Spartan Team Osiris. 117’s team is Blue. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2018 Trash the oc kills any potential this story had |
| OnePunchPlayer chapter 5 . 9/3/2018 Buck and Cayde are both Gunslingers?...[Siiiigh] (Scrapping Golden Guns...[Shakes head in distaste]) (Hey~ you pick out the names of the Ghosts. Nice. Keep up the good work, author.) (Be Brave.) |
| 1740 chapter 3 . 8/30/2018 looking good so far m8 cant wait to see what you do with it 1740 out |
| edboy4926 chapter 4 . 8/31/2018 Good chapter. Keep on going. Some small grammar errors. Are you going to include the other Destiny expansions and D2? |
| edboy4926 chapter 3 . 8/31/2018 Good chapter. |
| edboy4926 chapter 2 . 8/31/2018 Interesting intro. |
| OnePunchPlayer chapter 4 . 8/31/2018 I'm sure Fireteams Blue and Osiris can hold their own in the Crucible [Jokes] but they need to watch out from getting themselves vaporized by Nova Bombs, Fists of Havoc, Sentinel Shields, etc. Despite their advanced armor I don't know how they're going to fare with Void Light. (Updated just now huh? Keep up the good work.) |
| BraveSeeker3 chapter 4 . 8/31/2018 You're one letter off - it's Fillion. :D |
| OnePunchPlayer chapter 3 . 8/31/2018 "I meant it in a good way!" He said defending himself as he touched his cheek. "Ow...that hurt." He said. "Could have been worse." Milly said. (Yeah? Like how Bungie in the near future would update the Social Spaces having us Guardians NOW able to use our guns and swords and kill each other in the Tower other than jumping off of the Tower?...that would be a pain to be honest. ( -_-) ) "How so?" "She could have thrown off the tower." Deric laughs. "Don't do that!" I panic. I know that Halo said that so long as the Ghost is still alive and have a connection to the Light Guardians are immortal, but still! I didn't want to see that. (But now you do, Guardian Hope! You Traveler-Spawn-Spartans would finally be able to live up to you what you are: "Spartans never die."~ [Jokes]) (An Interesting reunion coming up next chapter? Hopefully you will continue this good story. Keep it up.) (Be Brave...) |
| 1740 chapter 3 . 8/31/2018 looking good so far m8 if you need help dont msg me on this or at for any proof reading 1740 out |
| Redbarchetta28 chapter 3 . 8/30/2018 this is pretty good hope to see more of it |
| jojobinks01 chapter 3 . 8/29/2018 i cant wait to see buck and cayde meet each other. |
